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Penguin challenge by Aria

Oct 12, 2009 23:25

Title: Follow Without Pride
Author: Aria
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: PG
Word Count: 4899
Summary: In which Diefenbaker chases a car, Ray buys a stuffed penguin, and Fraser gets a clue.

( Follow Without Pride )

penguin challenge

Comments 45

sam80853 October 13 2009, 04:22:43 UTC

A stuffed penguin for Dief and something more for Fraser & Ray, \o/. Perfect!

ariastar October 13 2009, 14:08:07 UTC

Yay! Thank you. :)

innocentsmith October 13 2009, 04:39:22 UTC

OMG, I did a little happy dance in my chair when I saw you'd posted fic!

Only in dS could a fic with two major characters getting injured be this adorably sweet. What is that? But oh, I loved it. Thank goodness Fraser got a clue at the end. Great Fraser POV, and such a lovely, wise Ray in this one. While still being Ray, obviously.

"It isn't detrimental, Ray."

"Tell that to my arm," Ray said, but he said it like an automatic reflex before understanding dawned on his face.

&hearts! And the last two paragraphs were utter love.

ariastar October 13 2009, 14:11:30 UTC

Only in dS could a fic with two major characters getting injured be this adorably sweet. What is that?

Probably because you know they'll be all right! Fraser routinely defies the laws of physics, so a sprained paw and a bullet graze shouldn't be big problems for long.

And thank you so much, both for the lovely comment and for the fact that you apparently did a happy dance. :D

mergatrude October 13 2009, 04:55:26 UTC

My god! Ray is so very, very brave. Thank goodness Fraser stops with his shit.

*pets Dief a lot*

ariastar October 13 2009, 14:11:51 UTC

*pets Dief too!*

Thanks. <3

exbex October 13 2009, 04:57:39 UTC

\o/ This is a wonderful fic; the Fraser POV is absolutely perfect, as is the dialogue. I love how it's both tentative and hopeful.

ariastar October 13 2009, 14:12:33 UTC

Ee, thank you. <3

nextian October 13 2009, 05:43:45 UTC

Dief is definitely my favorite character here, but I love the sad, raspy balance of their relationship. I hope those two crazy kids can work it out.

ariastar October 13 2009, 14:14:26 UTC

I think I need to write more Fraser POV, if only so that Dief can have 'dialogue' instead of being a mobile prop. (That: is the real reason I want to write a Young Wizards crossover, not gonna lie.) But I'm sure those crazy kids can work it out! They usually do.

Thanks for the comment, hon. <3