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Penguin challenge by Aria

Oct 12, 2009 23:25

Title: Follow Without Pride
Author: Aria
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: PG
Word Count: 4899
Summary: In which Diefenbaker chases a car, Ray buys a stuffed penguin, and Fraser gets a clue.

( Follow Without Pride )

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Comments 45

tres_mechante December 9 2009, 01:10:44 UTC

Oh, boys. *sigh* But YAY! for happy ending beginning! Nicely done. :D

ariastar December 13 2009, 15:36:59 UTC

Oh boys, indeed. Thank you! :D

primroseburrows December 15 2009, 19:09:18 UTC

Yay Fraser for getting out of his own head for once. Double yay for F/K kisses, which are, after all, the best. :) Yay to the zillionth power for Dief and his new penguin! Being an owner of a stuffed penguin myself, I highly recommend them. :D

nargynargy January 19 2010, 21:44:42 UTC

I loved reading this, the characterisations were spot-on, Kowalski especially. This line:
Ray nodded. Ray nodded and kept nodding, his hands tightening on the steering wheel and a little muscle jumping in his jaw, but all he said was, "You got it."
- it seemed perfectly him, the way he'd internalise and then BAM, there'd be a sudden explosion of ranting. Perfect!

anonymous March 28 2012, 03:09:20 UTC

Fraser is really hard luck on those around him...