Penguin challenge by Aria

[ariastar]

Title: Follow Without Pride
Author: Aria
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: PG
Word Count: 4899
Summary: In which Diefenbaker chases a car, Ray buys a stuffed penguin, and Fraser gets a clue.

Comments

[suchthefangirl]

This was lovely.

It has gone into my "to-be-read-again-and-again" folder.

Thank you.

[ariastar]

Yay! Thank you. :)

[ariastar]

Hee. Thank you. :D

[soda_and_capes]

I am slowly catching up on your dS fic!

the moment Fraser ducked out of his office-bedroom to reassure Ray
Oh, sure, Fraser was reassuring Ray. OH, FRASER. :(

Sodium-white street light fell in stripes on the carpet, illuminating Ray's still-anxious face,
Oh, god, that's just a nice turn of phrase.

limping doggedly
Haha! Um. Also, Dief breaks my heart. I can't stand bad stuff happening to animals. I'M GLAD YOU DIDN'T SHOOT HIM.

he finally slipped from his kinetic stillness
Ngh, oh man, I have missed the prettiness of your writing. Also, have I mentioned that being in Fraser's head is weird? It's weird.

one of them even supported by the available evidence,
:DDDDDDDD RAY.

"But you're pissed off when he does stuff like that?" Ray wanted to know. "When he doesn't listen and almost gets killed?"
I SEE.

hand-in-hand, brushing shoulders, looking at one another across a table or a warehouse, connecting
My god, they are great.

The lamplight had turned his irises almost crystal-pale,
lolol you think CKR is so hot.

done something in its

[ariastar]

SCOTT REVIEW. <333

Being in Fraser's head is indeed weird! I am ... slowly learning to like it. It is a process, and also he thinks he is smarter in his own head than Ray does, which means I am more likely to want to punch Fraser when I am writing his POV. Does that make sense?

lolol you think CKR is so hot.

Oh, stfu. Me and like 90% of the people in this fandom, okay.

One day I will try REALLY HARD to write you Ray&Fraser gen! (Actually the next thing, the Ray/Ray fic where Fraser is a ghost? The Kowalski&Fraser relationship came out really gen. Does that count?)

Mostly though YAY COMMENT. I LOVE WHEN YOU COMMENT. <333

[soda_and_capes]

It absolutely makes sense! The thing that most makes me want to punch him is how he lies to himself and rationalizes everything. Then again, those things also make me like him better. lol likes terrible characters. /o\

YOU AND 90% OF THIS FANDOM ARE WRONG ON THE INTERNET.

Hmm, idk if that counts or not. I'll let you know when I read it. ♥ But if you write Fraser/Ray gen, I will write that Remus/Sirius gen I spoke of.

<333333333333333

[oxoniensis]

Oh, that was lovely! Such a good Fraser voice!

[ariastar]

Thank you! :)

[meresy]

asdghjk I have had this open in a tab for a month and only just now read it and asdfgh. I love this. Fraser thinks way too much. Thank goodness Dief and Ray are around to poke him. *hearts!*

[ariastar]

Fraser definitely thinks way too much. :D Thanks! <3