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Spooked challenge by Aria

Oct 19, 2009 23:43

Title: Carry On
Author: Aria
Pairing: Kowalski/Vecchio
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 8299
Summary: What's worse than a dead best friend? A dead best friend who sits in your armchair going on about unfinished business and giving you worried looks. In which Fraser and Vecchio each try to be helpful in their own way, and Ray just tries to get on with his ( Read more... )

spooked challenge

Comments 52

spuffyduds October 20 2009, 04:06:52 UTC

Oh, WAAAAAH! And it's perfect. I love the "entendre" thing, and especially I love Ray bemoaning the lack of CREATIVITY in using a warehouse down by the docks.

Wonderful throughout.

ariastar October 20 2009, 13:25:34 UTC

That may have been my own inability to come up with something more creative than a warehouse, but at least Ray got to make sarcastic commentary about it. :D

Thank you. <333

plotbunniofdoom October 20 2009, 04:36:02 UTC

Oh, this is so great! I love that Fraser appears to Ray for the first time in a car on a stakeout like Bob did. :)

And Ray! Poor Ray, you can feel his pain almost like a physical thing in this and I love your Vecchio too.

And Dief! The little whine he gives when he sees Fraser! :(

Great fic. :)

ariastar October 20 2009, 13:26:12 UTC

Fraser probably thought a stakeout was the most appropriate venue! :)

Thank you. <3

everysecondtues October 20 2009, 08:17:13 UTC

Ouch, ouch, ouch. This was so good, and I really loved Ray and Ray and how they interact, and RayK's reaction to Fraser's ghost, and Fraser's reaction to being a ghost, and Dief, oh Dief. I love this story, and the thing I love hurts me. But this story is totally worth it.

ariastar October 20 2009, 13:27:21 UTC

I'm glad you're okay being hurt, then! Thanks. <333

labellementeuse October 20 2009, 08:18:49 UTC

There are actual tears here! Well, OK, not actual tears, but I welled up. I know, I know, happy ending, but... Fraser! :(

You give good Dief in this one.

ariastar October 20 2009, 13:27:47 UTC

Aw. *offers tissues*

Thank you. <333

nextian October 20 2009, 08:21:05 UTC

This is totally lovely. Though I am not entirely sure I believe that Fraser's gone for good. "I think you really should do something for Ray's birthday, Ray."

The Cubbies probably wouldn't be playing the Yankees, they are in different leagues. The White Sox could, though.

ariastar October 20 2009, 13:29:05 UTC

Oh, I'm sure Fraser's going to turn up again at some point. It took Bob years to go away.

(And thank you for the correction! I should always have you on hand to baseball-beta for me, apparently.)

<3