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Spooked challenge by Aria

Oct 19, 2009 23:43

Title: Carry On
Author: Aria
Pairing: Kowalski/Vecchio
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 8299
Summary: What's worse than a dead best friend? A dead best friend who sits in your armchair going on about unfinished business and giving you worried looks. In which Fraser and Vecchio each try to be helpful in their own way, and Ray just tries to get on with his ( Read more... )

spooked challenge

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china_shop October 20 2009, 09:32:44 UTC

*flails* Another one right out of the park! And Ray/Ray! Eeeee! So lovely -- the progression and the inevitable concern for each other and gravitating together and oh, Fraser! *incoherence*

♥♥♥

ariastar October 20 2009, 13:29:22 UTC

Yay! Thank you so much. <3

lian_li October 20 2009, 10:11:24 UTC

Aw. This was really good, and really sad. *sniffle*

ariastar October 20 2009, 13:29:35 UTC

*offers tissues* Thanks! <3

stregaxbene October 20 2009, 10:23:57 UTC

Thank you kindly!
I like it!

ariastar October 20 2009, 13:29:53 UTC

Thank you. :)

inathunderstorm October 20 2009, 14:46:03 UTC

YOU KNOW IT IS REALLY HARD TO EXPLAIN TO MY COWORKERS WHY I'M CRYING AT MY DESK, WOMAN.

::SNIFFLES::

<3

I love this, and I really, really REALLY love this part:
Both Dief and Vecchio were in the lunch room, like Huey said; Vecchio was sitting, glaring at Dief, while Dief gazed up at him adoringly, all smug wagging tail. "Did I say 'No, of course, take the meat out of my sandwich. I didn't want a ham sandwich, I just wanted a lettuce sandwich! I'll let the wild animal have the prime cut!' Did I say that?" Vecchio demanded. "No, I did not say that. And what do you do? You take it!"

VECCHIO. <3

"Don't talk," Ray said. "You talk, bad things happen."

HAHAH BOYS <3

Aria! YOU WROTE RAY/RAY. ::draws hearts all around it:: And you made them like each other and--I JUST LOVE THAT. Also your Dief made me :D!

I now want the fic from Vecchio's POV where Fraser shows up and haunts HIM for some reason. ::giggles:: This is just fabulous!

ariastar October 20 2009, 15:50:34 UTC

I'M SORRY! Wait, no, am I sorry? I don't know. *offers tissues*

I now want fic from Vecchio's POV where Fraser haunts him too! Sadly I have about zero faith in my ability to write Vecchio POV. Perhaps you should do it? :D?

Anyway, thaaaank you, darling. <333

inathunderstorm October 20 2009, 18:01:49 UTC

Don't be sorry! I love things that make me emotional, hee.

Hey, you give good Vecchio! I have every faith that you could do it :)

And welcome! <333!

snoopypez November 4 2009, 23:21:58 UTC

I now want the fic from Vecchio's POV where Fraser shows up and haunts HIM for some reason.

me too! just imagine him popping up all "Ray Kowalski seems to be giving me the silent treatment right now, perhaps you could help me?" and then Vecchio is all O_O before getting over it and being pissy that Fraser only showed himself to Kowalski in the first place. awwwwww.

vienna_waits October 20 2009, 16:07:25 UTC

Oh, this was wonderful. Everyone rang very true and in-character. I really enjoyed this fic!

ariastar October 20 2009, 18:12:17 UTC

Thank you! <3