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Spooked challenge by china shop

Oct 28, 2009 10:04

Frannie gen, 500 words, G-rated. Character death.
Thanks and more thanks to mergatrude for beta.

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qe2 October 27 2009, 21:07:52 UTC

♥

Lovely. And just right.

china_shop October 27 2009, 21:49:00 UTC

Thanks, you! ♥

inathunderstorm October 27 2009, 21:51:19 UTC

Aww, I really like this! So perfectly Frannie <3

china_shop October 27 2009, 22:35:41 UTC

Thanks! :-D

(glomp)

luzula October 27 2009, 21:56:55 UTC

Oh, Frannie. I liked this bit:

"You're my baby."

"No," said Frannie firmly, "I have a baby."

china_shop October 27 2009, 22:36:03 UTC

Thanks! *beams*

bradygirl_12 October 27 2009, 22:17:37 UTC

Nicely done! I've always had a soft spot for Frannie.

china_shop October 27 2009, 22:36:36 UTC

Me too! Thanks. :-)

isiscolo October 27 2009, 22:53:38 UTC

Aw, I like this. I like Frannie-fic. (Although I'd quibble with calling this gen since there's implied Ray/M, which to any reader would signal Ray/Fraser.)

It makes me think of North where Ray's dad shows up to yell at him.

china_shop October 28 2009, 03:26:54 UTC

which to any reader would signal Ray/Fraser

Really? I thought it was a toss-up whether it was Ray/Fraser or Ray/Ray. (I did toy with the idea of F/K/V, but thought that might be over-egging the pudding. *g*) Anyway, I nearly marked it "Vecchio/m", but I didn't want to highlight the ambiguity, so I left it. Is that wrong?

It makes me think of North where Ray's dad shows up to yell at him.

\o/ That was exactly the kind of vibe I was going for. Thanks! :-D

isiscolo October 28 2009, 15:29:04 UTC

Oh, hee, despite me being way more Ray/Ray than F/V my mind went to the latter. I wonder why? But of course you're right.

china_shop October 28 2009, 19:58:59 UTC

So do you think it's cheating not to put a pairing? *is unsure*