Spooked challenge by china shop

Oct 28, 2009 10:04

Frannie gen, 500 words, G-rated. Character death.
Thanks and more thanks to mergatrude for beta.

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akite October 28 2009, 00:05:16 UTC
Awww...I'm glad Ray and whoever is down the hall are looking out for Frannie. Ma Vecchio needs to find her nocturnal (Hee!) rest and give it a rest. *g*

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china_shop October 28 2009, 03:27:11 UTC
*g* Thanks!

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prudence_dearly October 28 2009, 02:17:25 UTC
Hey, have you been in my brains? I was just thinking yesterday about how it's always dads haunting sons -- and how about a mother haunting a daughter. (I'm overlooking Maggie's ability to see Dead!Bob, for brevity.)

You've done this very nicely indeed. I particularly like that Frannie's still dobbing Ray in to their Ma, even after Ma's dead. That's a little sister for you.

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china_shop October 28 2009, 03:27:57 UTC
No, but it sounds like your brains would be a fun place to visit. *g*

Thanks so much. *beams*

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green_grrl October 28 2009, 02:43:44 UTC
With the canon ghosts, this is the next step! Poor Frannie.

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china_shop October 28 2009, 03:28:30 UTC
Ah well, could be worse? I'm sure she'd rather see her mother than her father. /o\

:-)

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brigantine October 28 2009, 04:54:45 UTC
Nocturnal rest. Hee!

I like that bit where she softens and tells Ma to take care - that little gesture of love there, even though Frannie's quite clear that she's not going to take any nonsense. :)

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china_shop October 28 2009, 20:00:44 UTC
Thanks!

I think that's the line Fraser's always treading with Bob too, you know? I love you but you make me craaaazy but you're dead and I should be kind! ;-)

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buddleia October 28 2009, 11:43:36 UTC
Aw, Frannie. Lovely, lovely.

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china_shop October 28 2009, 20:00:53 UTC
Thanks! :-D

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