Chase challenge: "Not That Kind Of Out" by Luzula

Apr 16, 2010 09:19

Title: Not That Kind Of Out
Author: luzula
Pairing: Frannie/Elaine, with background F/K/V
Rating: PG
Length: 1400 words
Summary: Elaine and Frannie, flirting in a bar.
Notes: Thanks to spuffyduds for a quick beta! This little story started its life as a stop_drop_porn contribution, but I just couldn't get them into bed quickly enough.

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petronelle April 16 2010, 12:24:11 UTC
Awwwwww. I love your Frannie, and your Elaine's practicality makes me beam. They deserve some sweet lovin', and they're both capable of providing it.

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luzula April 16 2010, 15:34:21 UTC
Thank you! It's the first time I write Elaine at all, and I'm delighted that you think it worked.

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mizface April 16 2010, 16:17:31 UTC
What a lovely treat this is, luz! I could easily picture this, and love your focus on Elaine and Frannie, with just the right amount of other character mentions. I loved the entire thing, but especially Frannie's roundabout rambly way of asking Elaine out.

*happysighs*

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luzula April 16 2010, 17:48:23 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you like it--it's the first time I write this pairing at all.

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brigantine April 16 2010, 16:57:12 UTC
Hee! This is adorable! And Elaine is quite right - Frannie does have a very cute belly button. ;)

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luzula April 17 2010, 09:08:58 UTC
Thank you! And I was only writing from memory--now I have this urge to go search the episodes for scenes where Frannie's belly button is visible.

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china_shop April 16 2010, 22:38:22 UTC
Eeee, this is wonderful! So sweet! Yay!

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luzula April 17 2010, 09:09:21 UTC
Thank you! \o/

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the_antichris April 17 2010, 00:26:11 UTC
Eeee, this is really cute! I love Frannie tripping over herself like that.

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luzula April 17 2010, 09:09:40 UTC
I'm glad you like it! I've never written this pairing before.

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