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Silence challenge: "Communication", by Luzula

Jun 13, 2010 20:48

Title: Communication
Author: Luzula
Characters: Fraser and Dief gen
Rating: G
Length: 1100 words
Summary: Dief wasn't quite like other wolves.
Notes: Thanks to mizface for the helpful beta!

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plotbunniofdoom June 14 2010, 18:16:05 UTC

Oh, I really like this! :)

luzula June 15 2010, 15:05:38 UTC

Thank you. : )

akamine_chan June 14 2010, 18:25:27 UTC

I love this story a lot, Luz. Very well done. And Dief-y. *g*

luzula June 15 2010, 15:08:16 UTC

Thanks, Aka. Yes, it filled me with Dief-love...

tinzelda June 15 2010, 03:55:07 UTC

This made me laugh, in spite of the sort of lonely feeling of some of it - leave it to Fraser to compliment the health of someone's illegal crop.

luzula June 15 2010, 15:09:07 UTC

Well, I'm glad it gave you both kinds of feelings--that's pretty much what I was going for.

mergatrude June 15 2010, 04:37:03 UTC

That was fun and also warm and fuzzy! &hearts

luzula June 15 2010, 15:09:37 UTC

Dief is very warm and fuzzy. : )

akuni June 15 2010, 13:16:08 UTC

So sweet, and a little sad to see the younger, lonelier Fraser. It's lovely how Dief fits right in. A bit of chaos is just what he needs to prepare him for the adventures we know he has ahead of him! :D

luzula June 15 2010, 15:18:46 UTC

Thanks! Yes, he is rather lonely (which I mistyped as "lovely" at first, and he totally is that, too). I think Dief is good for him. And the Rays will be even better.