Silence challenge: "Communication", by Luzula

Jun 13, 2010 20:48

Title: Communication
Author: Luzula
Characters: Fraser and Dief gen
Rating: G
Length: 1100 words
Summary: Dief wasn't quite like other wolves.
Notes: Thanks to mizface for the helpful beta!

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the_antichris June 15 2010, 22:33:59 UTC
This is lovely - I love seeing them learn how to work together. <3

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luzula June 16 2010, 08:03:39 UTC
Thanks! I realized that I'd never written any Dief backstory, and then I just had to write this.

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wanderingsmith June 19 2010, 02:49:21 UTC
awww! that was lovely.
the sound of young!fraser, still mostly innocent of his own outcastness, lonely but denying it...
and that hint of identifying with Dief for losing his mother, insightful.
liked how you showed the 'communication' itself, very believable.

lol, poor weed!guy. frase probably *as* impressed with the plants too... that's just not enough to keep you out of jail

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luzula June 21 2010, 20:46:28 UTC
Thank you! Actually, I didn't think about this at all:

and that hint of identifying with Dief for losing his mother, insightful.

Maybe my subconscious can take the credit, or something. *g*

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wanderingsmith June 21 2010, 21:34:37 UTC
absolutely! -tries to remember a Frase lecture on the subconscious assimilating clues for decision-making...-

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troyswann June 19 2010, 20:31:30 UTC
Oh, yay! \o/

I loved Fraser's deadpan response about how wolves don't speak, except for body language and vocalizations.

And other, Dief-like, things :)

As the human companion of a dog who sends picture-grams into my head via his large ears, I sympathize with Fraser a lot.

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luzula June 25 2010, 10:57:35 UTC
Yay, thank you! I do like it when I manage one of Fraser's deadpan responses. And now that you say it, the dog ears in yours icon do look like big transmitters. *g*

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china_shop August 8 2010, 03:03:40 UTC
Awwww, this is awesome! Baby!Dief! ♥♥♥

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luzula August 8 2010, 10:38:06 UTC
Oh hey, thank you! : )

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