NC-17 | Broken Bone | Part 4

[dugindeep]

Comments

[meesasometimes]

perfect combo.

therapist Jensen all commanding and in charge and hot sweaty naked Jared (at least that's how I always imagined him)! I mean I basically never dressed him after you started him off naked half covered with a sheet.

fantastic story A!!!!

[dugindeep]

Thank you! Once I started thinking about it, I couldn't stop getting excited about PT!Jensen/Smug-All-Star!Jared, so I'm glad it worked for you :D

[corbyinoz]

Very enjoyable. I love a little snark on Jensen, and you trod a fine line with Jared - he was initially obnoxious, but you put enough into the characterisation that you could see the good guy underneath. And as ever, your dialogue just flowed so effortlessly. You make it all seem so easy!

[dugindeep]

I'm glad you liked the characters here! I didn't want a fussy or overly cranky Jensen, and the same with Jared - layers to peel back. And I'm glad you liked the dialogue! I had fun writing their banter.

Thank you Corby!

[matalinolukaret]

I stopped writing my own meant to be because of this. I hate you. But love you too because I loved it.

So there's this love/hate thing coming from me.

I'll be over there. ♥

[dugindeep]

Now get back to yours!

I mostly lovely you right now, so it'll be enough for the both of us ♥

[neros_violin]

You win all the things. The banter was perrrrrrrrrfect, and the development of their relationship was totally believable and not out of character for either of them and super satisfying at the end, and I will be reading this one again and again and again. Great work, bb! <3

[dugindeep]

ALL THE THINGS.

You know I love good banter ;-) And I'm glad you liked the pace of the relationship and how they were together. Thank you bb!

[without_me]

This was enjoyable from beginning to end. Thank you so much for sharing it!

[dugindeep]

Thank you so much for reading! :D