comment fic meme!

Aug 06, 2012 08:42

I have decided to ignore all responsibility today ;-)

Comment with an existing verse from my master list and a brief prompt

YAY! Random writing when I should be doing other things :D

FILLED PROMPTS

Trainfic
The AC is out and Jared is grumpier than Jensen
Jared reading off someone's iPad on the train
Dealing with children on the trainLove is a ( Read more... )

broken bone, comment!fic, cops and robbers, big bang 2012, best laid plans, girl!jensen, gooooooooooooooooal!, player number 2, copfic, the way to really fly, this long silence, 100 days and messes, softball is not for the delicate

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zubeneschamali August 6 2012, 13:52:43 UTC
Metra 'verse! The air conditioning is out on the train ride home, and sweaty as he gets, Jared's more grumpy about it than Jensen.

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gladly! dugindeep August 6 2012, 14:12:49 UTC
"You're overreacting," Jensen says calmly. He slides his finger down his iPhone screen, keeps on reading through work emails, then flicks through screens to load financial blogs and read.

Jared sighs and shifts in his seat. He, again, makes wiping his face a physical show by tipping his head to one side, swiping those huge hands of his over his forehead, across his cheek, along his jaw.

"You gonna be okay there?" Jensen asks idly, eyes stuck to his screen.

"How are you not sweating? Seriously? It's like 170 degrees in here."

"That sounds physically impossible."

"Your face is physically impossible," Jared mumbles back.

Jensen glances up at Jared, a mess of sweat and hair, flushed from forehead down to his chest, visible within the the now-wide opening of his button-up. He must've unbuttoned half those buttons in the last five minutes because Jensen's sure he would've remembered Jared showing up to the train station like that"What's up, Hasselhoff?" Jensen asks, doing a piss-poor job of hiding his smirk because Jared smacks his ( ... )

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Re: gladly! zubeneschamali August 6 2012, 14:25:46 UTC
LOL, poor Jared! Love the "your face" comebacks. Hope Jensen makes it up to him when they get home. ;)

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Re: gladly! dugindeep August 6 2012, 14:33:51 UTC
Of course he will! :D

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tebtosca August 6 2012, 14:25:00 UTC
From our BB! Post-fic established relationship, Danneel comes up to Van to visit and after they all get drunk on tequila, she dares J2 to make out for her viewing pleasure :D

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If I MUST ;-) dugindeep August 6 2012, 15:01:38 UTC
"C'mon!" Danneel whines.

Jensen smirks when he can tell she's squirming in the big, fluffy arm chair across from him and Jared, but he's not going to give her any ammo. "And why would we do this again?" he asks slowly. He doesn't blame the tequila, but rather the way Jared is rubbing slow circles into the back of his neck.

"For the fruits of my libel." Jensen lifts an eyebrow and she shakes her head and flicks her lips out as if that will jump start her mouth to talk properly. "Labor. Fruits of my labor."

"You're so drunk," Jared laughs. Then giggles. Proving he is, too.

Danneel sits up on her knees and points directly at Jensen, as if he isn't just ten feet away and no one would know who she's talking about as she rattles on, "I had to listen to this baby moan and bemoan and go on and on about you for years. He moaned and bemoaned, Jared!"

"I think those two words mean the same thing,” Jensen says.

Jared squeezes the back of Jensen's neck. "They're close, but not exactly."

Jensen glances up at Jared and thinks Jared's so ( ... )

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Re: If I MUST ;-) tebtosca August 6 2012, 15:04:14 UTC
"For postur-os-ities sake," she garbles as she fumbles her phone out as if she's about to film it all. “Poster-oddities.”

"Posthumously? Pasturization?"

BWHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA.

THIS IS TOTALLY MY NEW HEADCANON

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Re: If I MUST ;-) dugindeep August 6 2012, 15:05:21 UTC
LOL I'm so glad you enjoyed this! :D

Poor lil Danneel. The world's perfect hag and she has to BEG to watch them ;-)

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deirdre_c August 6 2012, 14:27:32 UTC
Player #2 'verse: Skinnydipping! ;D

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dugindeep August 6 2012, 15:41:11 UTC
It's well past midnight, Jared's giddy, and it's all very teenage rebellion to have climbed the fence at the closed pool in the middle of the night. It's also incredibly tempting when Jared yanks his shirt over his head, torso twisting beautifully in the moonlight, abdomen rolling perfectly as he laughs and undoes his belt the buttons on his jeans ( ... )

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deirdre_c August 6 2012, 15:58:20 UTC
Jensen is staring at miles of tan skin, smooth even in the dark. "That is my favorite costume of all," he murmurs.

Eeee!! I was hoping you'd write that! It's exactly the reason I picked that particular prompt for this 'verse! *sealclaps*

Jared does some hand-clasping-thing that squirts water between them and right up Jensen's nose.

Gah, these two are just so CUUUUUUUUTE. \o/

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dugindeep August 6 2012, 16:49:46 UTC
HEEEEEEEEEEEEE! That line popped into my head the second I thought of Jared stripping for him :d

Yay! I'm so glad you liked this!

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mdlaw August 6 2012, 14:45:03 UTC
I know exactly how Jared feels. m :)

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dugindeep August 6 2012, 15:10:11 UTC
Me too! Last summer, my brother and I were taking the train in the bad heat and just barely made it ... so we walked through the entire train to find two seats together and it wound up being up top of a train with the heat on LOL

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raeschae August 6 2012, 14:48:46 UTC
I don't know if there is a verse, or what you're calling it if there is, but I would love to see PT!Jensen and BasketballSuperstar!Jared and something having to do with the Olympics.

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dugindeep August 6 2012, 16:00:08 UTC
"Are you sure this is okay?" Jensen asks, for what feels like the twentieth time.

Jared looks up from his suitcase and glares at Jensen across the bed. "The first thirty times you asked, yes, it was okay. But the thirty-first? Man, now I'm not so sure."

"I'm just saying," Jensen says as casually as possible. "Once I'm on that flight, there's no turning back."

Jared flaps his suitcase shut, rounds the bed, and stands in front of Jensen, who keeps fussing with his own packing. "Do you not wanna go?"

Jensen gives Jared a crazy look because not going is pretty damned crazy. "Uh, it's the Olympics. Of course I wanna go." When Jared doesn't reply to that, Jensen adds on, "I wanna watch you play and hang out and maybe go watch some other sports ( ... )

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raeschae August 6 2012, 16:28:22 UTC
EEEEE!

I want to go with them! I want to sit right beside Jensen while watching basketball AND volleyball.

I love this and I love you!

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dugindeep August 6 2012, 16:50:15 UTC
Doesn't everyone?!

ILU!

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