Please proofread these sentences

Apr 29, 2008 10:19

Hi guys! I am not a native speaker and really need your help! I need to proofread these ten sentences, thank you!
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1.      In order to raise enough income revenue were going to haveto raise taxes.

2.      When the new telephone books arrive. Be sure to recycle the old ones.

3.      The number of academically gifted ( Read more... )

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aldecoary April 29 2008, 21:29:13 UTC
Is this homework of some sort? And what's your native language? *is curious*

I don't want to just give you answers if this is indeed an assignment, but if these are your answers that you want proofread, I did correct them:

1. In order to raise enough income revenue, we are going to have to raise taxes.

2. When the new telephone books arrives, be sure to recycle the old one.

3. The number of academically gifted children in Canada is large.

4. My three goals are to earn a seat offer, finish college, and get a job.

5. With a slight chuckle, Sharon related the amusing incident to the police officer.

6. We have, in fact, sent out too many brochures already.

7. As you know, the employee search committee interviewed a qualified applicant.

8. It's bound to turn up in the women's powder room on the third floor.

9. The engine as well as the wings was destroyed in the crash.

10. This is Laura’s company's fifth anniversery.

Hope this helps!

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blck_phnx April 30 2008, 06:17:23 UTC
Darn, Aldecoary beat me to it. (As usual) I guess...(since Aldecoary did a great job)...I will only say this---good luck with whatever those sentences are for!

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