Chaos Theory in Vortex Orbits in Relative Dimensions in Time and Space (24/27)

[earlgreytea68]

Title - Chaos Theory in Vortex Orbits in Relative Dimensions in Time and Space (24/27)
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[aibhinn]

Okay, first: I fail at reviewing. Fail, fail FAIL. I'm so sorry.

Second: YAY THEY'RE BACK TOGETHER AND THEY'VE GOT FORTUNA AND JACKIE CAME WITH THEM AND YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY!

ahem.

Apparently, I've been on tenterhooks since you dragged me backwards through a briar patch and hornets' nest with your version of "Doomsday". You've fixed it. Hooray! :D

[np_complete]

I completely agree with aibhinn here. She says it all.

[earlgreytea68]

Aw, thank you!

[earlgreytea68]

I'm so glad that you survived the briar patch and hornets' nest!

[bouncy_castle79]

Soooo, I've read it about a dozen times, but I still burst into tears when Brem does. Oh, Brem!

[earlgreytea68]

Yes: Oh, Brem! (I *am* in love with him.)

[altorogue]

Oh YAY!!! Go Brem! And poor Jackie . . . she gets Pete back again but then loses him but she's such a good Grandma . . I can't tell you how much I ADORE these kids.

[earlgreytea68]

"she gets Pete back again but then loses him but she's such a good Grandma"

It's true. But getting him back at all was a bonus she never expected. And it's true that she's such a good grandma.

[azriona]

Awesome. Do I have first post? Even more awesome. shoot, missed it by three

And then Jackie said, abruptly, “I’m coming with you.”

This totally threw me. But it's so obvious, isn't it? Jackie, given the choice between Daughter and Second-Pete, would take Rose any day of the week. Obviously so.

“I have so much to tell you,” Athena said. “First off, Daddy does not know how to braid.

I absolutely laughed out loud. Athena rocks.

He walked over to her, looked at her for a long moment with solemn brown eyes. “Mummy,” he said, finally, and his voice broke on the word, and he was on her suddenly, crying huge, wracking sobs while he tried to burrow into her.

She had the impression that he was crying all the tears he had never cried over her, and the thought made her gather him to her, rocking him in a way he hadn’t let her in so very long, much longer than the year they’d been separated in her timeline, lowering her face into him and sobbing with him.

Perfect.

Thank you.

[earlgreytea68]

You probably would have had first post, had you just quickly posted "First!" So I'm going to give it to you. ;-)

"Jackie, given the choice between Daughter and Second-Pete, would take Rose any day of the week. Obviously so."

I thought so. I couldn't write it any other way.

"Athena rocks."

She does that. ;-)

Thank *you.*

[javabreeze]

[earlgreytea68]

Aw, I wish it *were* in book form! With a movie deal! ;-)

So happy you loved it!