I'm always looking to improve my boy so any constructive and polite crit of Haru will be appreciated! Please don't just tell me what I'm doing wrong. Give me examples and suggestions on how to fix it.

Since I'm screening replies, if you really need feedback on your crit then please leave a message in the comment.

Anon is ON!

IP logging is OFF!

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PLAYER INFORMATION

PLAYER: Lover
AGE: Over 18
CONTACT: AIM: LoveroftheFlame1, Plurk: Lover22, E-mail: loveroftheflame@comcast.net
PERSONAL LJ: loveroftheflame  (I rarely use it anymore though)
CHARACTERS PLAYED: None atm.

CHARACTER INFORMATION

NAME: Haru Zheng
CANON: Avatar the Last Airbender
CANON REFERENCE:  Read more... )

~Permissions~
- Threadhopping with this character - yes/no/other?: You're more than welcome to, unless the thread is private
- Subject line comments: Have at it!
- Hugging this character?: Go right ahead!
- Giving this character a kiss?: If you want to see him freak out, sure!
- Badtouching: See the kiss~
- Lovers: None yet
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