An Affair To Forget

Nov 16, 2009 17:32

I met her, again, for the first time ( Read more... )

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kittyshock November 17 2009, 07:32:01 UTC
reading this creates a certain feeling in me...i just cant pinpoint what that is...it tugs at my heart in a way i guess...

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eddue November 17 2009, 07:43:08 UTC
I got a few responses on this one. I think a lot of relationships seem that way when you look back on them and ask yourself: "What was I thinking?"

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An Affair to forget eddue November 18 2009, 17:03:54 UTC
I got a few responses about this one, including yours. But this reply seemed to get it just the way I intended it to be. Not sure if it was meant to be helpful or an insult but it was the exactly what I was going for. It seemed to be the perfect description for too many relationships.

"jackball25" wrote:

This might just be the biggest and worse cliche I've ever seen.

I think you should try and re-read twilight before you write anything else today.

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vixenzpistol November 22 2009, 05:39:48 UTC
Bravo!. You have a nack for ending with the best lines!
"There was never anyone like her, and there always will be..."

loved this one!

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eddue November 22 2009, 05:44:05 UTC
I appreciate your comment. Sometimes the last line is the most important and the hardest part.

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wsdante December 7 2009, 05:50:11 UTC
I like Lear/Nash-type perspective twists. You've got a good gift for that.

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eddue December 7 2009, 15:48:47 UTC
Thanks for your comments, and comparison.

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