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ediblewolfpeach

Ficlet: Mistakes (PG)

Mar 09, 2007 04:12

Title: Mistakes
Author: R. Tom Mato
Rating: PG
Warnings: Kid!fic.
Notes: Just something I wondered about with all the kid!fics I've seen. Usually the patterns in who gets kidified(?) and who's left watching over them.

( He had had conversations like this with Elizabeth and many of the scientists since the offworld incident and Ronon was the only one so far who had understood. )

guardian, stargate: atlantis

Comments 19

berlinghoff79 March 9 2007, 12:23:31 UTC

He left Meredith behind? Without telling him where they were going?
MEN!! They can be so clueless sometimes.*shakes head*

More? Pwease?

ediblewolfpeach March 9 2007, 15:33:41 UTC

Glad you liked (both of them!)

There may be more. I want Lorne to teach them to fingerpant. Can you imagine the mess? *happysigh* I'm not sure what else, though. >.>

mangst March 10 2007, 21:27:25 UTC

I am loving these. I like that you gave each child an individual personality, rather than having them be generic kids. I like that Rodney is *Meredith* because he won't be called Rodney until he is much older. And I like that the kids aren't happy go lucky. They have real feelings and they would be kind of messed up with their parents being suddenly gone, aliens doing who knows what to them, and finding themselves in a *really* strange place. Is there going to be more?

ediblewolfpeach March 11 2007, 03:42:13 UTC

*grin* Thank you! I'm hoping there's going to be more. I may be able to get fanart out of the fingerpainting with Lorne idea, I just have to find my Lorne!muse. :) I already have an idea of how they're going to change back (it wont be all quick and easy, believe me). So we shall see.

Review anonymous March 14 2007, 04:26:45 UTC

Interesting series. I like it a lot so far.

--Silverthreads

seratonation March 24 2007, 13:28:50 UTC

He left!! how could he just leave!! but i liked how Radek was so protevtive of Mer, and Ronon speaking softly, and the kids *huggles them* are you plannning on more? coz that would be cool.

sherriaisling July 28 2007, 04:43:45 UTC

This series is so adorable and original. I enjoy it very much and do hope that you still plan to continue.

(And boy do Meredith's silent crying and abandonment issues say all sorts of scary things about what his parents were like.)