Comments | elastic_4: requiem for innocence

drawingintheair in elastic_4

requiem for innocence

Oct 13, 2012 00:30

requiem for innocence
eunhae
nc-17
growing up doesn't mean putting out your own fires. it means watching them burn until the smoke dies out
7313 words

( Dependency is the kinder word for addiction. It's the socially acceptable version for the weakness inside of people, the thing they crave without restraint, without reason. )

pairing: donghae/eunhyuk, author: the super awfadtco, fandom: super junior, rating: nc-17

Comments 53

cadey October 13 2012, 05:38:47 UTC

This was beautifully written, very evocative, and when it comes down to it, a damn good story. I can't even pinpoint my favorite moment from there, but I liked how you were writing Donghae in China and how you kept the smoking throughout the story. The ending line is awesome, too. Ugh, now I want to go reread it like fifteen times.

drawingintheair October 18 2012, 20:46:31 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it.

tesa11 October 13 2012, 09:50:31 UTC

you and your words...why so beautiful...
I seriously lost words to compliment you :")

drawingintheair October 18 2012, 20:46:48 UTC

Thank you :)

shin_ah_mi October 13 2012, 10:42:09 UTC

as always
you made me heartachingly speechless
to never let go against all odds and logic against one's own belief
that's just too good...
and the ending is yet full of unknown...may be hope?...
thx for this

drawingintheair October 18 2012, 20:49:30 UTC

Thank you for reading!

rurouneko October 13 2012, 11:32:11 UTC

the angst circling this fic... but there's also hope confided in :'3
as always, your writing is really beautiful. i'm glad you decided to write this down aly <3

drawingintheair October 18 2012, 20:51:28 UTC

I really wanted to convey the sense of hope by the end. While it's easy to say 'and they lived happily ever after' I felt like just letting you feel like they will figure it out along the way was a lot more fitting.
I'm glad you liked it :3

eunhae_holic86 October 13 2012, 15:35:47 UTC

spot