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drawingintheair in elastic_4

requiem for innocence

Oct 13, 2012 00:30

requiem for innocence
eunhae
nc-17
growing up doesn't mean putting out your own fires. it means watching them burn until the smoke dies out
7313 words

( Dependency is the kinder word for addiction. It's the socially acceptable version for the weakness inside of people, the thing they crave without restraint, without reason. )

pairing: donghae/eunhyuk, author: the super awfadtco, fandom: super junior, rating: nc-17

Comments 53

steeel_magnolia October 13 2012, 15:44:11 UTC

good boy hyukjae caused quite a bit of trouble here...
i always don't know what to say after reading your stories, mainly because i get a lot of feelings i can't really pin on.
i love how you can make scenes bittersweet,
and i like how to donghae, cigarette smoke is like his relationship with hyukjae. at least thats how i see it. oh, i shall have to reread this and let it soak into my peabrain >

drawingintheair October 18 2012, 21:06:21 UTC

In a sense Hyukjae (or his image I should say) falls into good boy stereotypes: religious background, no drinking, ect, so i thought it would be fitting to refute or have him prove otherwise when Donghae accuses him of being one.
Smoking is parallel with his relationship with Hyukjae so I'm glad you pointed that out :) Thank for reading.

l_mmdays October 13 2012, 16:25:13 UTC

T_T letmedie

SPOT

l_mmdays October 13 2012, 18:01:29 UTC

You're amazing and your writing is simply beautiful and it aches, every and each word and every paragraph practicaly aches, this good you are and I truly believed that you left this fandom like many others. And that made a hole in my heart because why would you, beautiful girl, leave my life without the gorgeous pain that is Eunhae? Why would you stop pushing me into this dazzle that infects my mind?

I'm so fucking glad that you came back to me us because you're one of my beloved writers in this fandon and you're one of the reasons why I'm reading Eunhae, and your way of writing stories about them and the way you create their lives again and again and again leaves me drooling.

How can you-- how--
Donghae smiles back, eyes dancing but tight lipped.

He wonders if she knows. He wonders how she can't.

--how can you write these words in such a perfect way? How does words come out of your mind in such a nice way? How?

And this: The taste of bitterness starts settling on the underside of his tongue with each cigarette. It starts ( ... )

drawingintheair October 18 2012, 21:16:14 UTC

Thank you so much for such heart warming and lovely comment. Writing can be a frustrating process and often other engagements and responsibilities get in the way but it is encouraging to know that some of you still stick around and come back to read my things even when I've been gone for a while.

So seriously, thank you, and I hope to come up with a few more stories for these two yet.

livelovespeak37 October 13 2012, 19:23:28 UTC

This was beautiful. I haven't read something of this quality in a long time, so this made me really happy. Can't wait to read more from you :)

drawingintheair October 18 2012, 21:17:09 UTC

Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you liked it.

luvey October 13 2012, 20:18:27 UTC

tackles you with love.
i swoon over your words like i swoon over lee donghae.
you make my mind swirl.
everything about this.
from the cigarette smoking, to the girlfriend, to donghae's "trust me"
just everything.

drawingintheair October 18 2012, 21:18:21 UTC

I've seen you swoon over Donghae so I will take this as the best compliment I've ever received.