A totally engrossing story! I loved the medical details, and really appreciated how you kept Jared acting professionally--it wouldn't have been nearly as compelling a story if he had just gone with Jensen's suggestions.
Very enjoyable! I planned on taking a peek and reading a few paragraphs to see if it snagged me. It did! Loved it all, the immediate attraction, Jared's professionalism, Jensen's flirting and persistence.
The only thing that bothered me is we still don't know who messed with Jensen's car! He's still in danger. And he's still going to race. Does this mean sequel perhaps??
either way, loved this. Awesome job! Must feel great to finally post :)
Ah, I'm so glad it snagged you in! :D Thanks for reading, and for letting me know you liked it.
It's funny, usually I am ALL about the plot, and I'd thought the nefarious sabotage was going to be a bigger part of the story. But then it seemed that the relationship and hospital stuff was what I really wanted to write, and that part kind of faded into the background. I did end up cutting out a few bits I didn't have time to develop, and so hopefully yes, sequel or at least timestamp. (Eventually, haha. Yes, it was great to get this done, and I think I need to recover. ;)
Thank you so much! I'm really glad that resonated with you. Jared's professional conflict was what I wanted the story to center around, when the idea first occurred to me, so it's good to hear that worked.
I love celebrity/regular citizen fics. I read this in one sitting with so many other things to do, that is how much I love this. Are you a doctor irl? The detail is amazing! You definitely go beyond what we see on TV. I've never read anything by you before, but I loved your pacing and language so much that I will make an effort to do so now. Thanks for the great work!! Will you be doing a PDF? I'd love to have this story saved.
Oh my gosh, you have no idea how happy your comment makes me! :D I'm delighted you liked this.
There is a PDF now (linked above) courtesy of another user, and I've also got it up on AO3 so multiple formats are available there.
It is a HUGE compliment to hear that you would like to read more of my stuff!!! Everything's in tags/memories here on LJ, and my previous big bangs are also on AO3. (At the risk of self-promotion here, I might suggest "Green Means Go", if you like pacing/plot...)
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Thanks so much for reading, and letting me know. <3
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The only thing that bothered me is we still don't know who messed with Jensen's car! He's still in danger. And he's still going to race. Does this mean sequel perhaps??
either way, loved this. Awesome job! Must feel great to finally post :)
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It's funny, usually I am ALL about the plot, and I'd thought the nefarious sabotage was going to be a bigger part of the story. But then it seemed that the relationship and hospital stuff was what I really wanted to write, and that part kind of faded into the background. I did end up cutting out a few bits I didn't have time to develop, and so hopefully yes, sequel or at least timestamp. (Eventually, haha. Yes, it was great to get this done, and I think I need to recover. ;)
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There is a PDF now (linked above) courtesy of another user, and I've also got it up on AO3 so multiple formats are available there.
It is a HUGE compliment to hear that you would like to read more of my stuff!!! Everything's in tags/memories here on LJ, and my previous big bangs are also on AO3. (At the risk of self-promotion here, I might suggest "Green Means Go", if you like pacing/plot...)
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I am posting my spn bb today. My first! :D
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