Comments | eleventy9: fic: the way it never lasts (stevie&xabi)

eleventy9

Oct 04, 2010 19:36

title: the way it never lasts
rating: r
pairing/characters: steven gerrard & xabi alonso
disclaimer: this story is complete fiction.
summary: AU snapshots of a marriage falling apart
( For the first time in two weeks, Stevie is home at a reasonable hour. )

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eleventy9 October 5 2010, 00:00:34 UTC

in every universe, in every fic he always leaves. :(

tessalonso October 10 2010, 07:57:05 UTC

Ha, not in mine. I always give them their happy ending. I'm such a wuss.

lullaby9 October 4 2010, 17:13:25 UTC

He turns and presses a kiss on Stevie’s forehead and thinks, I love you.

Out loud he says, says, says, ‘I am leaving you.’

:CCC!

eleventy9 October 5 2010, 00:02:06 UTC

i do hope so. :( i think xabi needs to figure himself out first.

thanks for commenting.

sumrndmgrl October 4 2010, 21:26:19 UTC

a refreshing fic. different style and AU than usual. plus the thought of steven and xabi in suits? unf :)

eleventy9 October 5 2010, 00:02:29 UTC

thanks for commenting!

unf indeed ;)

coldryuuza October 4 2010, 22:05:27 UTC

D: oh.

damn.

well, that sucked ass and broke my tiny heart :(

eleventy9 October 5 2010, 00:03:21 UTC

sorry :(

...things can only get better?

onsides October 5 2010, 00:18:16 UTC

Woah!

I really love this. It's a completely different view of them and it's heartbreakingly beautiful. Great work!

eleventy9 October 6 2010, 00:06:59 UTC

thank you!