The sky above us

Nov 02, 2010 20:39

Title: The sky above us
Pairing: Donghae/Hyukjae
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Fluff, Romance
Summary: Just one beautiful night spent at the beach and one beautiful moment between two lovers.
A/N: My second fic - another attempt for romantic Eunhae. Kinda inspired by this beautiful Coldplay song.

You stand here in the water with me sticked to you. A couple of droplets are running down your bare shoulders, flowing down to connect with the surface of the sea and your wet skin seems to glow under the moonlight. You are so beautiful that I just can't believe you're all mine. )

fanfiction: the sky above us, pairing: haehyuk, lenght: oneshot, genre: fluff, rating: pg-13, genre: romance

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dizzchan November 2 2010, 20:06:53 UTC
*dying of this sweetness*
Omooo... That's sooo sweeetttt... Sooo romantiiiicsss.... Sooo cheessyyy...
I'm melting now bb....

Kyaaaa!!! Haeee.. Hyuukiieee.... Can I hug u both??????? >.<
And big hugs for the author...
For making this!!!
really love u!!!!
Hwaiting!!
♪───O(≧∇≦)O────♪

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elforevereunhae November 2 2010, 20:33:13 UTC
C'mon let's do group hug! <333
You're so sweet dear! ^^
I LOVE YOU TOO~♥
Thanks very much!
*huggles you*

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static_abyss November 2 2010, 20:20:47 UTC
spottttttt

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static_abyss November 2 2010, 20:32:40 UTC
*died*
I'm sorry. I can't post anything anymore forever because you killed me. I am dead. See, me <---dead. OMG that was the sweetest, most perfect, djkfhdsjfhlk thing I have ever read. It was so gahhhh. I can't even tell you how many times I melted. My heart is just one bug puddle of goo right now. I have to mop it up and put it back together again, but it's no use because I am going to reread this and melt all over again.

I love this. I love everything. I love how you describe them both. I love the metaphors. And gah, so sweet. Yes, go do somethign crazy you guys. I can't believe this. I am going on fan girl mode over here. Dear, you did an awesome job. Eunhae is LOVE!!!!!!!

I don't know what to do. I want to point out my favorite parts, but I can't because i love everything, from the very first sentence to this one:

You know Donghae, the stars could fade and die, but our love will always live on. It's written in the sky.It rhymed and it was so sweet and it was perfect. PERFECT i tell you. OMG!!!!!! eeeep *squeal* I am going to ( ... )

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elforevereunhae November 2 2010, 20:42:31 UTC
OMG! *o* Are you kidding me? This is the best comment I have ever get!
Just don't die, please! T__T I'll mop it up for you!
Thanks so much for reading and commenting!!! <333
I really had no confidence about this fic so I'm glad you like it! ^^
I LOVE YOU FOREVER~♥ ♥ ♥
*kissu*

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dhenia November 2 2010, 20:36:47 UTC
Sooo sweettt *4 thumbs up 4 the author*

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elforevereunhae November 2 2010, 20:44:27 UTC
Thank you dear~! ^^
You're sweet too! <333

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eunhae_holic86 November 2 2010, 20:44:55 UTC
OH GOD that was fdmbcnxlsaaoid i like youre fic this the 2nd Righ
p.s add to mem
add as friend

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elforevereunhae November 2 2010, 20:52:38 UTC
Thank for reading! Thanks for commenting! Thanks for liking it! Thanks for meming! Thank you so much!!! <333
*adds you back* ^^

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eunhae_holic86 November 2 2010, 21:01:32 UTC
im trying to add it as mem but i cant i get a msg:*pout*
this the msg
No memories found.
This could be because:
1.the user hasn't defined any memorable events,
2.the user's memorable events are protected and you don't have access to view them, or
3.the user doesn't have any memories that match your filter criteria.

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elforevereunhae November 2 2010, 21:16:31 UTC
WTF??? I don't know what's wrong?! *o* I don't really know.

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suju_wonderbang November 2 2010, 21:17:10 UTC
QWEDWAD
HALLO AND OMG THIS IS JUST THE SWEETEST THING EVAH *0*
Ahhhh I can't find words to explain but's just so sweet and romantic and lovely and all that jazz!! ^^
Those two are just so darned amazing together...I love this couple so much!!!
Thank you very much for posting~~
May I mems plz? *___*
Byes~~

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elforevereunhae November 2 2010, 21:24:50 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting! <333
Yeah, Eunhae is the best!!!
Ofcourse, you can mem! ^^
*huggles*

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