Comments | elforevereunhae: Drawing a line

elforevereunhae

Drawing a line

Dec 04, 2010 16:29

Title: Drawing a line
Pairing: Donghae/Hyukjae
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance
Summary: Drawing is Donghae's obsession. And for Hyukjae it's unbelievably fascinating.
A/N: Just a short one because I don't have much time. Enjoy reading!

( I love watching you draw. The concentrated expression on your face, wrinkles formed between your eyebrows, head tilted to the side and tongue sticked out a little. Your hand moving across the paper, shading the lines, smudging it with fingertips. The way you hum a random melody. How you don't care about things around you. How you're lost in your obsession. )

pairing: haehyuk, lenght: oneshot, fanfiction: drawing a line, rating: pg-13, genre: romance

Comments 75

xstacia December 4 2010, 18:23:45 UTC

Goodness, this is just beautiful. How could you say this is a fail? It's more like a double WIN.

The words you used, the words you didn't use. How you described everything was just amazing. It's so romantic and fluffy at the same time. ♥

SO MEMMING THIS. ♥

elforevereunhae December 4 2010, 18:51:50 UTC

Well, I'm overcritical perfectionist but you just made me more confident. ^^
Thank you very much, dear. <3
Thanks for memming ♥

noroimono December 4 2010, 19:01:13 UTC

wow this is really good!
very well written

and i loved the story~

thanks!

elforevereunhae December 4 2010, 19:07:46 UTC

Thank you, dear ♥

tees2mai December 4 2010, 20:01:50 UTC

I loved this! Drawing naked hyuk bit was kinf og beautiful because hae only draws nature <3

elforevereunhae December 4 2010, 21:29:15 UTC

Yes, exactly! ^^
Thank you very much! ♥

suju_wonderbang December 4 2010, 21:43:13 UTC

This is simply too beautiful for words. *____*
I swear...just...GAHH!!! *mems*
This comment is so lame but I just want you to know how much I fucking LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

elforevereunhae December 4 2010, 21:51:14 UTC

Thank you so much sweetie! <3
Thanks for memming!
It's not lame. I'm glad you like it!
*huggles*

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