Comments | elforevereunhae: Drawing a line

elforevereunhae

Drawing a line

Dec 04, 2010 16:29

Title: Drawing a line
Pairing: Donghae/Hyukjae
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance
Summary: Drawing is Donghae's obsession. And for Hyukjae it's unbelievably fascinating.
A/N: Just a short one because I don't have much time. Enjoy reading!

( I love watching you draw. The concentrated expression on your face, wrinkles formed between your eyebrows, head tilted to the side and tongue sticked out a little. Your hand moving across the paper, shading the lines, smudging it with fingertips. The way you hum a random melody. How you don't care about things around you. How you're lost in your obsession. )

pairing: haehyuk, lenght: oneshot, fanfiction: drawing a line, rating: pg-13, genre: romance

Comments 75

ink_river10 December 5 2010, 01:34:00 UTC

Hi, I got sent here from static_abyss's LJ and she is correct, this was amazing. EunHae are not even my favorite pairing but this was lovely and really well written! Please don't be too hard on yourself, okay? Writing is art but it's also for joy. I write slash because I love it, and I love the freedom of it. If other people enjoy it, all the better.

This fic is a perfect example of a good story written by someone with talent and I'm so pleased you posted it here.

Oh and I also asked Ana to marry me about three weeks ago and she said yes. SHE'S A NAUGHTY LITTLE CHEATING WIFE!

*giggles*

static_abyss December 5 2010, 03:28:14 UTC

O= HOLY ZHOU MI!
*shuffles nervously*
Oh look! It's hanchul!
*runs*

ink_river10 December 5 2010, 03:32:07 UTC

Come back here you saucy little minx!!!!

*pauses*

*dangles naked Hankyung as bait*

static_abyss December 5 2010, 03:37:56 UTC

DAMN IT!!!!!!! NOT FAIR!!!! THAT'S CHEATING! YOU TOTALLY CHEATED ME ON THAT ONE!
*pouts*
*sits down and sulks*
Can I have Hankyung now?

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elforevereunhae December 5 2010, 08:58:49 UTC

OMG, THANKS FOR THIS SUPER AWESOME COMMENT! <333
You have no idea how happy your comment made me!
I'm so so so glad you like it that much! ^^
Drawing is one fascinating talent which can a human have and I will never understand those amazing talented people.
I'm happy that you liked the explanations and... and...
THANK YOU SO MUCH!
I seriously love you! <3
Yup, PM is okay with me. But you don't really have to do it if you don't want to.
Aww, poor bb! T__T Be strong and don't that damn school let you down, okay? ^^
Again... I LOVE YOUR COMMENT!
Thanks a lot!!!

chiyo_87 December 5 2010, 05:13:19 UTC

HOLY SHISUS!!!! YOU WRITE SO WELL, THE SCENES WERE DEPICTED SO CLEVERLY AND IDK, YOU SOMEHOW DRAW OUT THE BEAUTY IN DRAWING! I can't wait for your other works! They're so damn good. *mems this!*

And I see that you have a lot of LOONNNNNG comments already so I'll stop here keke. <3

elforevereunhae December 5 2010, 08:36:22 UTC

OMG, THANK YOU SO MUCH GIRL!!! <3
I'm glad you like my works! ^^
*huggles*

chiyo_87 December 5 2010, 08:45:25 UTC

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elforevereunhae December 5 2010, 10:10:34 UTC

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mangoedust December 5 2010, 05:57:42 UTC

Wow..this was beautiful :D
HAEHYUK FTW <3

elforevereunhae December 5 2010, 08:34:25 UTC

Thanks a lot, dear! ^^
<3

meolchiloveshae December 5 2010, 06:59:46 UTC

IM NOW OFFICIALLY UR STAN!!!!!<33333

SERIOUSLY!! THIS IS FREAKIN A PIECE OF ART~!!!!!

OMFG I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!! AND I LOVE WHEN HYUK SAT BETWEEN HAE'S LEGS AND HAE WAS BREATHING ON HIS NECK^^

BE HAPPY COZ IM GONNA MEME THIS AS MY FIRST MEME IN MY LJ ACC^^<3333

elforevereunhae December 5 2010, 08:39:57 UTC

HOLLY SHISUS, THANK YOU SO MUCH!
I don't deserve this!
I LOVE YOU TOOOO~ <3
I'm happy! I'm so freakin happy right now! ^^
Thanks for memming! Thanks for awesome comment!
*squeezing you*