Comments | elforevereunhae: Drawing a line

elforevereunhae

Drawing a line

Dec 04, 2010 16:29

Title: Drawing a line
Pairing: Donghae/Hyukjae
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance
Summary: Drawing is Donghae's obsession. And for Hyukjae it's unbelievably fascinating.
A/N: Just a short one because I don't have much time. Enjoy reading!

( I love watching you draw. The concentrated expression on your face, wrinkles formed between your eyebrows, head tilted to the side and tongue sticked out a little. Your hand moving across the paper, shading the lines, smudging it with fingertips. The way you hum a random melody. How you don't care about things around you. How you're lost in your obsession. )

pairing: haehyuk, lenght: oneshot, fanfiction: drawing a line, rating: pg-13, genre: romance

Comments 75

6purplegiraffes December 5 2010, 07:33:31 UTC

this is beautiful i have no idea why you said it's a fail T__T
i love this :D

elforevereunhae December 5 2010, 08:33:49 UTC

Well, I'm overcritical. T__T
Thanks very much! <3

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elforevereunhae December 5 2010, 15:43:01 UTC

Words are not always necessary.
Thanks very much. <3
I'm glad you like it.
Thanks for sweet comment ♥

eunhaesherry December 5 2010, 14:43:19 UTC

Bb! Spot for me! I comment soon neh! Iam busy with exams! Wait for me! Fyi i freaking love this

elforevereunhae December 5 2010, 15:44:33 UTC

*saves spot* <3
Take your time. ^^
I'm busy with school too T__T

eunhaesherry December 7 2010, 06:07:22 UTC

wahhhhhhhh! i love this bb! seriously!
sorry for late comment neh! i am very busy!
anyway! i love how you describe the passion of drawing and of course the way that you describe hyukjae!
i love the romantic scene too! like hyuk sit in btween hae! omg!
i am so in love with this!
wah!

its ok bb about the school thing!
its normal and always happen to us! reality bb!
so i hope that your life will be much2 better neh!
take care too! dont make yourself sick neh!
i love ya! thnx for the wonderful fic! i am so in love with it!

elforevereunhae December 7 2010, 08:02:54 UTC

Thank you very much! <3
I'm glad you like it bb! ^^
*huggles*
Yeah, school... *sigh* I'll try to not think of it.

pretty_pheej December 6 2010, 07:11:49 UTC

first off, it's not a fail... this is a nice one shot...
i love how detailed you are in explaining the feelings brought out in this fic...
thanks for sharing... ;p

ps: don't worry i've gone through same 'shit' in school... it will all pass just like the wind and time flies so fast that you wouldn't realize you've already graduated... and make the most out of your school life though it sometimes sucks... but the real life or the world after graduating sucks more! hehe... XD

elforevereunhae December 6 2010, 13:56:31 UTC

Thank you very muchie! :3

Life after graduation can't suck.
Everything's better than school! :D

pretty_pheej December 6 2010, 14:10:36 UTC

haha! well, that's partly true... that is without the problems... just enjoy life and continue going crazy over super junior, especially eunhae! haha! that's what i'm doing lately anyways... XD

fanaeh December 6 2010, 16:24:24 UTC

i'm not lying.this is the BEST!!!!
your writing is totally A+++
tease hyuk is SEXY!!!
love this :D

elforevereunhae December 6 2010, 17:02:18 UTC

Thanks very much for being sweet! *huggles*
<3