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elhoserboy

Space Wasters

May 29, 2007 03:17

So my brother, The Douche, and I have a little TV Show on Public Access in San Francisco. Initially, it was just gonna be a TV thing, but we've decided to make the episodes available for download for those who don't live in San Francisco or those who do live in San Francisco but can't not see the second half-hour of 24 ( Read more... )

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jourdannex May 29 2007, 13:17:29 UTC

You're a natural :)

boringpostcard July 8 2007, 20:52:05 UTC

Old skool NES and a dude who doesn't need chicks because he has dudes. Made me chuckle.

turkishb February 23 2008, 05:15:20 UTC

howdy, saw your show on youtube. didnt really grab the lols out of me, but kept me entertained and i watched the whole way through. you obviously have a good grasp of form. i think maybe you just need to differentiate your characters somewhat more and pace faster? that was my intuitive response to it, that you didn't get out of scenes as fast as you needed to sometimes. i think maybe this is partially because you're trying for 30 minutes, but really have somewhat less material?

i think you'd be benefited by adding one or two more distinct voices to the show to break up the drone and introduce some conflict. anyway, hope those notes are sort of helpful and taken in the right spirit. i enjoy seeing such a promising little show get put on internet access. :) also for whomever is shooting, don't be afraid of more insert shots! break up your composition a little, it's adding to the monotony.

(take with a grain of salt too, i'm not a comedy writer, but some big troupes are active on my campus so i have a basis for comparison...)

AWESOME sedated April 26 2008, 02:11:49 UTC

and you knew me from before you were famous.

Will your brother douchebag ever make a cameo?

Re: AWESOME elhoserboy May 11 2008, 08:37:47 UTC

Well, well! Ms. Froxen Nips, what are YOU doing here?

Your comment has brought to light the folly of my wording. There are three people involved in the show:

1) My Brother (director)
2) The Douche (my roommate)
3) Me

You see? The Douche is a douchebag; my brother is my brother. It's not: My brother the douchebag.

Anyway, glad you're still alive. Hope all's well in your real-life world.