It's official - hell has frozen over

Jun 05, 2011 14:24

It must have done, because here I am posting something to my LJ after, what? Ooh...three years or so. Not only that, but the something is a story. A finished story. No, I know. I can hardly believe it myself.

Anyway, without further ado, and with grateful thanks to msmoat, who so generously injured herself to provide me with inspiration, here (behind ( Read more... )

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merentha13 June 5 2011, 15:15:35 UTC
“I did save your life earlier,” Bodie pointed out.
Doyle waved that away. “You’re always doing that. Not good enough. Try again.”

Wonderful lines! I really did enjoy this. You've captured the lads perfectly! Humor and a serious message. I hope you'll write some more new Pro's stories! (and thanks to msmoat fo providing the inspiration, although I hope she won't have to go to this extreme next time! *g* )

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elizabethoshea June 5 2011, 16:19:48 UTC
Thank you! I'm delighted you liked it. I would love to write more Pros, and at the moment - with a whole week of leave ahead of me - it's easy to make myself believe I could. Talk to me again when I'm back at work, though, and I might think differently...

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snailbones June 5 2011, 15:18:25 UTC


What a lovely treat, thank you! I feel guilty that msmoat inspired this with her poor face, but hopefully this'll make her feel a bit better about it *g*

Now, are you positive you don't want to be snogged? ::waggles eyebrows::

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elizabethoshea June 5 2011, 16:58:52 UTC
Thank you! I hope poor msmoat feels it was worth her while fainting to encourage me.

As for the snogging. Well.... Let's just say I thoroughly appreciate the sentiment, but (understatement of the century) I'm not the touchy-feeliest person you're ever likely to meet. :)

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sc_fossil June 5 2011, 15:47:10 UTC
It's easy to see Bodie pulling a stunt like that. He liked getting up people's noses. I liked the banter and the way they understand each other. Thanks so much! And thanks for taking care of our B. *g* .

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elizabethoshea June 5 2011, 17:00:44 UTC
My very great pleasure . Not that I seem to be making a very good job of it, seeing as how she's sitting beside me at the moment, going, "Ow, ow, ow!" with her freshly injured hands and leg!

Very glad you enjoyed the story.

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siskiou June 5 2011, 16:46:10 UTC
Lovely surprise to wake up to, this morning. And there is a story by msmoat waiting, too! :D

Everything was so real, as if watching it in an episode! Great banter and voices, and now that you've said it, I could really see Bodie doing something like this, because he is subconsciously angry at Doyle, and using this as an outlet.

Please write more! :)

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elizabethoshea June 5 2011, 17:02:12 UTC
You're very kind, thank you! I'm really glad it worked for you. And you must definitely read MsMoat's story; it's lovely.

As for writing more, well, I'd love to. If I can just persuade life to cooperate a little better than it usually does...

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scherwood June 5 2011, 17:00:22 UTC
*so much love*

Thank you~! ;D
This made my day!! \o/

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elizabethoshea June 5 2011, 17:02:57 UTC
Ah, thank you! You've just made mine .

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