opinions people...

[ellicottstation]

i like to analyze people's poetry. don't ask. anyway, a friend of mine wrote this. opinions, people. what do you think, any good? i kinda like it. i've been working on writing but i still think i suck

Comments

[fallburn]

you sure you didnt write it?, though its sounds like eli, for real man

[ellicottstation]

nupe. i don't think i could ever show my own poetry...it sucks -_-

[honeybrown0185]

im not even quite sure who you are but you wanted comments so here it goes: i dont like it. its a little too homey g. if you know what im saying. a bit cocky and seems like whoever wrote this is trying to be a gangster. maybe if you were a black male who lived in the ghetto and carried a glock around everywhere you went this might suit you. but if thats you in your pic you are little white girl. you could sell it to a rapper maybe? but keep trying cause the rhymes were working it just doesn't go mesh well with you.

but thanks for commenting...

[ellicottstation]

1) nupe it's not me in my pic
2) it's not my work
3) homey g, eh? uhh...
4) who the hell are you by the way?

~jessie

Re: but thanks for commenting...

[honeybrown0185]

1. oh, sorry
2. ok then
3. homey g. as in gun toating gangster
4. catharine a. :)

Re: but thanks for commenting...

[ellicottstation]

sweet! what's good catherine? how's life? (it's jess paiva, in case you didn't notice...)

[chibiaeris]

"One beautiful motion,
a stroke without flaws"

Reminds me of painting and speed painting and gesture drawings. I love that part.

[ellicottstation]

sweet! i like poetry cuz people can interpret it all their own.