Comments | elliebear128: Echo Through

elliebear128

Echo Through

Apr 25, 2010 05:55

Title: Echo Through
Characters: Kyuhyun/Donghae
Author: ElmersGlue128
Rating: NC-17 (explicit sex, infidelity)
Length: one-shot
Words: 6,454
Summary: As five-year-olds, they become linked by heartbeats because Kyuhyun thought it would be funny. As they grow up, he and Donghae are threaded together by the connection.
Notes: Numbers at the beginning ( Read more... )

thanks for the title little kimchee!, echo through, down with bland black pearl food!!!, dialogue is hot, kyuhyun/donghae

Comments 64

hunni23 April 25 2010, 13:23:01 UTC

spot

elliebear128 May 7 2010, 10:24:38 UTC

lol. So what did ya think?

hunni23 May 8 2010, 04:52:58 UTC

woops~ soory I totally forgot to comment!
this was beautiful! I didnt want it to end~
recently i've liked reading some of your fics, keep up the good work!
<3~

elliebear128 May 9 2010, 06:39:38 UTC

aw, thank you! I'm glad to hear~

(And no probs, I do that all the time ;D)

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polyurethane April 25 2010, 13:23:28 UTC

Wow, I really liked this. :)

I'd give a more thought-out comment but it's really early in the morning and I'm running on no sleep.

But I liked how this flowed. ♥

elliebear128 May 5 2010, 07:47:45 UTC

Aw. Thank you~! <3

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namikaze_jkc April 25 2010, 13:42:56 UTC

XDDDDDDDDDDD
Two KyuHaes in one day.er, night. You made my night and I love this one as well!!! :D

elliebear128 May 5 2010, 07:48:40 UTC

lol, I guess KyuHae has been preoccupying my mind lately...

Thank you!~~<3

leunah23 April 25 2010, 15:09:57 UTC

ahhh...kyuhae...my secret OTP...
this fic was really really really amazing...
the smut was..I must say..beautiful smut...
i like the story very much...people were hurt in the process but I'm just too glad they still ended up with each other...
gaaaaaaaah i also read the one you posted yesterday and it was amazing as this one!! im sorry my internet connection failed before i can even properly comment on that..
i hope many people will read and comment in this fic coz...u deserve it so much! :)

elliebear128 May 5 2010, 07:51:31 UTC

Aw, you're so sweet <3

lol, why a secret otp? What's your non-secret one then? :D

I'm glad to hear you liked it~~~ And, double thanks for reading this one and the previous kyuhae ;D

<333333333

craiglockdhart April 25 2010, 15:52:50 UTC

this is really beautiful.
i loved all the unsaid emotions that ran through it, and how they sort of get back to where they belong in the end, but yet it isn't too explicit.

elliebear128 May 5 2010, 07:53:22 UTC

Thank you~~~~~ glad you enjoyed it!~~~~ <3

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