FF: What Things Are, Pt. 2

[elliestories]

Title: What Things Are
Author: Ellie
Rating: R (for adult themes)
Spoilers: Post-“Who’s Your Daddy?”

Part One is here.

Comments

[geminigal0530]

wow! that was so good and so sweet, i mean it wasn't as fluffy maybe but it was great and really cute. they're so cute, ugh if only it could happen on the show. anyway, great job i really hope you continue!

[elliestories]

If they do go the baby route on the show, I'd much rather see something like this happen than Cuddy actually having a baby. I'm glad you're liking my take on this.

[cincoflex]

This didn't need to be cute and fluffy, so don't worry--it's honest and awkward and just as wonderful because it's real. You've got the art of showing their relationship without telling it, and that a rare, beautiful thing in fanfic. Keep going; this is wonderful.

[elliestories]

Thank you so much for that. This did need to be honest and awkward and real, and that was incredibly challenging to write with something like this. I'm glad it's working for you as a reader.

[lissie_pissie]

PLEASE CONTINUE. addiction. love. omg yay.

[lissie_pissie]

and by "addiction. love." i mean mine to and of this story, not to House's to vicodin and of Cuddy. ;)

[elliestories]

Either way works ;) Thanks for the love!

[elliejgirl]

That was a beautiful chapter. Not fluffy, but you managed to show House being supportive yet remaining House

[elliestories]

Thank you! It was tough trying to keep him very much House, but still have him be sympathetic, in his way.

[crumpled_up]

This is so beautifully sad. And I agree, I'd like for this to happen on the show if they actually do something with baby storyline. It's realistic and... awkward. What I love is that House doesn't know what to do in this sort of situation. Oh, it's wonderful. You are just that amazing.

[elliestories]

Thank you! I was really trying for the awkward with House. He cares, he'd try to do something to help, but that's just so far from the realm of what he normally is.