Fic: Kick, Push, Will/Sue, NC-17

[ellydash]

Title: Kick, Push
Author: ellydash
Pairing: Will Schuester/Sue Sylvester
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 7,919
Warnings: Hate sex, masochism
Spoilers: 2x11 (The Sue Sylvester Bowl Shuffle) and 2x12 (Silly Love Songs); references to 1x21 (Funk)
Note: Takes place during the events of 2x12.

Summary: In the aftermath of her humiliating loss, Will attempts to lift

Comments

[dropsofviolet]

Sue. Man, that's all I can say. Her monologue was gorgeous and you even write a Will I can get behind. Uh, metaphorically speaking. I think my favorite line had to do with the revenge plans and chipmunks, but it was all amazing.

[ellydash]

I'm so pleased that you found Will likable here! It's always a challenge to me, writing Will - striking that balance between his frustrating lack of self-awareness and his very real desire to be a good person. In some ways, he's deceptively harder to write, I think, than Sue is.

Thank you so much. <3

[snoopypez]

SO. GOOD. It's just perfect. So many throw away lines of Sue-ridiculousness, and the Rachel and Mercedes cameo was amazing, and the Quinn, Emma and Carl ones were painful in just the right away.

Also, you know. It was hot. ;P

So glad you write them. So so glad.

[ellydash]

<3 You're always incredibly generous with your comments, and I appreciate it so much - thank you!

[deathsblood]

I don't have words enough to say how right this was. It was so perfectly Sue, and I adored her insults and thoughts, especially to Quinn.

[ellydash]

Thank you so much! <3 I'm thrilled Sue came across well, and I really loved writing that exchange with Quinn.

[ellydash]

I am totally in mourning for your longest comment ever, omg, I love longest comments ever

I'm totally thrilled you liked this. <3 I'm so glad Sue's voice is strong here! I always want to get her just right, and for some reason writing her this time was more of a struggle than it usually is.

[the_seaward]

This was so good. You do so well communicating the odd, codependent relationship these two have. This line struck me:

The thought depresses her: the two of them, tied together inside his terrible poem.

I love your handle on Sue's vulnerability. The call-back to Sue in her pearls was a nice touch. Sometimes she's just so dang heartbreaking!

I also really loved the whole restaurant scene - it was so fun. Great work, as always.

[ellydash]

Sue in her pearls waiting at Breadstix is just the saddest thing ever to me.

Thank you so much - I'm so pleased you liked this! <3