Fic: Kick, Push, Will/Sue, NC-17

Feb 12, 2011 10:24

Title: Kick, Push
Author: ellydash
Pairing: Will Schuester/Sue Sylvester
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 7,919
Warnings: Hate sex, masochism
Spoilers: 2x11 (The Sue Sylvester Bowl Shuffle) and 2x12 (Silly Love Songs); references to 1x21 (Funk)
Note: Takes place during the events of 2x12.

Summary: In the aftermath of her humiliating loss, Will attempts to lift ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, pairing: will/sue, character: sue sylvester, character: will schuester

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paintmybird February 14 2011, 21:29:55 UTC
Okay, this must be the hottest thing ever. I think I need a cigarette.

So many things about this were good. Really, the snarky banter, on-point characterization, fantastic sex. I adore it.

This made me lol for obvious reasons:
“Oh - fuck,” he whispers, clearly stunned by this statement. “Sue - God.”

“I highly approve of all those words being in one sentence, buddy,” she tells him, calmly, and withdraws her hand, facing forward again.

So. True. <3

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ellydash February 15 2011, 01:08:45 UTC
Your icon literally made me laugh out loud. Just amazing. The expression on her face is what makes it, really. <3

Thank you so much!

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devlinacardigan February 15 2011, 02:13:55 UTC
UNF!!!

You should just write Will/Sue all day, everyday, forever and ever. I love their unhealthy, insane, so very hot dynamic.

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ellydash February 15 2011, 19:34:19 UTC
Thank you so much! <3 I seriously love these two and their totally unhealthy craziness, and if it wouldn't get to be overkill (and be totally exhausting) I'd just write them constantly.

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sceptick February 16 2011, 02:20:08 UTC
Man oh man, that was fantastic. Sue came across perfectly, a wonderful blend of sardonic and lonely. I also really thought you captured Emma well; the scene where she tells Sue off read like that scene in Bad Reputation where she calls Will out on his behavior. A+ job, gurl, I loved it.

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ellydash February 16 2011, 08:00:58 UTC
I've noticed that I can't seem to stop writing Emma telling off Sue - it's just deeply satisfying on some level. So I'm glad her comments rang true!

Thank you so much <3

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littlestclouds February 16 2011, 13:24:12 UTC
Ah, I love everything about this. I love how you drop in other characters, I love Sue's lines, Will's earnestness. I really love how Sue can be vulnerable and still retain enough pride to insult Will. I found it poignant.

Also, are you secretly Ian Brennan? Just wondering. :P

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ellydash February 17 2011, 03:45:46 UTC
Last time I checked, I definitely wasn't Ian Brennan, but I'll keep you updated, let you know if anything changes. ;)

I'm so glad you enjoyed this! <3

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anonymous February 26 2011, 19:50:36 UTC
this was SO perfect. their mannerisms, their tone, the dialogue, even the way the would kiss one another. well done, im suddenly finding an intrest in these two

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ellydash February 27 2011, 04:26:32 UTC
Thank you so much, anon! And this is a fantastic ship, so welcome aboard. <3

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