Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses 1/?

[elsiesnuffin]

Title: It's Always Open Season On Princesses 1/?
Spoilers: Through 'For A Few Paintballs More'
Word Count: 1917
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Dan Harmon owns all of this and is kind of possessive of it, so...don't sue me.

A.N: I hope I don't disappoint you guys with this.  I'm going to switch POV with each chapter, so this one is from Jeff's subconscious.

Comments

so much win

[mysty_kitty]

I think I'm almost too excited to write anything constructive. As soon as I finished leaving a response to the prologue I found a brand new chapter.

So the shift in POV was interesting, Jeff really is trying so hard, and Annie isn't pulling any punches. I love it.

I'll be interested to see what happens when Annie goes to see Pierce, as well to Troy (why on earth would you vote out the guy who owns your house?)

That means that I hope to read more from you soon...so you're awesome!

Re: so much win

[elsiesnuffin]

Wow! You're so awesome! I'm glad you liked the other fic and are following this one. I agree with you, why on Earth would Troy vote Pierce out?

I'll update again as soon as I can!

[shopgirl909]

I don't what to say here except that I love this.

Oh, and can I stop hopping now? ;)

Looking forward to more.

[elsiesnuffin]

Yes, you may stop. But be ready to go back at it again when I say (TWSS)!

I'm glad you want more, becauseI have to get people over this beginning hump (don't!) quickly. I'm already 2 chapters in and haven't even set up the plot yet. That's generally a big no-no in writing.

[shopgirl909]

This is so good, that i don't even care.

[elsiesnuffin]

If you are sticking with this ' no standards when it comes to storyline' thing, I am gonna blow you away ;)

[supercapo]

As usual with one of your fics, Amazingsauce. I really like how you have things on a slowburn here. You can just feel how Jeff is slowly but surely losing his ability to stop himself. It's great.

Also I love how you have his suspicions about Abed being aroused and he doesn't even know about the kiss. I can't wait until you have that little nugget of info revealed to him.

Looking forward to more.

[elsiesnuffin]

Yeah, he could definitely tell in the episode that something was up with Jeff and Annie. I hope they don't drop that.

I'm glad you like it so far!

[tilie12]

please update soon! i know you've already posted this chapter and the prologue today but i'm already hooked on this story!

[elsiesnuffin]

I'll go as fast as I can, I promise! I should be able to post the next chapter tomorrow, depending on my shed-yool.

Thank you for reading :)

[teruel_a_witch]

WOOHOO, new chapter and so soon, and I lovelove me some Jeff!POV, why would you think it'd disappoint us? You've got spot-on group dynamic and so much little subtle things, I love subtle shippiness and angst, Jeff's inner turmoil (which he brought on himself) is just delicious <3

Bacon on ice-cream? EW, Troy XD

[elsiesnuffin]

I think the best thing about Jeff is his general lack of self-awareness. For someone as in love with themselves as he is, you would think he would try to introspect sometimes. He always just brushes stuff away though. I wonder if that is going to come back to bite him on the ass....

Oh, and bacon ice cream? Orgasmic.

[teruel_a_witch]

Yes, it makes for some very interesting story-telling potential, heh, he's like "Nope, I don't care, there's nothing between me and Annie, but why can't she just wear a chastity belt?" and he actually believes what he's saying, and that he's got both their best interests in mind but the thing is he does care and he's so wrong. *sigh* I will totally come back to bite him in the ass when he'll be wondering why does he have a strangle hankering to drown himself on the day of Annie's wedding xD (well, I hope it won't come to that, maybe Abed will knock sense into him eventually)

Lol, srsly? Even the thought of it makes my bile rise,lol, I just really can't stand the taste of salty mixing with sweet, depends on what cuisine you are used to, I guess.

[teruel_a_witch]

I will totally come back to bite him in the ass
LOL, stupid typo, I meant "IT" of course (but I will come after him too, if he doesn't man up eventually)