Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses 4/?

[elsiesnuffin]

Title: It's Always Open Season On Princesses 4/?
Spoilers: Through 'For A Few Paintballs More'
Word Count: 2164
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Dan Harmon owns all of this. 
Summary: How Jeff & Annie Spend Their Summer Vacations
AN: Okay.  So when we last left our adorable pair, Annie had lost her mind and said a lot of things to Jeff.  We're back to her POV

Comments

[heartjd]

Ooooh I loved Britta in this part!

“Seriously though, Annie. Have the most amazing time of your life. See everything and remember everything and write things down and let it change you, okay?”

I'm a big traveler and this is so true.

Thanks for the fast update :)

[elsiesnuffin]

I'm so glad Britta felt right to you. She is the character I get most nervous about when writing. I've never been anywhere, but I figure Britta has, so she would be wise about that.

Thank you for reading!

[halflegendary]

The constant repetition of Annie's inner monologue really rings true for me. Ordering her thoughts just like she orders everything else in her universe.

P.S. I have a really dirty brain because I kept waiting for condoms to be on her mental list. I figure that's about a 50/50 thing for her to pack, because she both would want to be prepared for anything and yet she wouldn't want to presume anything.

P.S.S. Oh! Oh, I just thought of something else! How horrible is the takeoff and/or landing going to be for her (and Jeff)? I keep playing the end of Say Anything in my head now. Ah, Lloyd Dobbler, they just don't make them like you anymore.

[elsiesnuffin]

I have that total OCD thing where I nake lists in groups of 3,like haiku. It helps me remember things. I figured Annie maybe had packed them but was too uptight to keep thinking about them. We still haven't heard her say 'penis'. And Lloyd Dobbler is one of the greatest movie characters of all time. I wrote something where Jeff kind of compared himself to Lloyd, which is the ONLY reason there will be no 'Say Anything' references in this fic. But other Cameron Crowe movies are up for grabs. Also John Hughes. And Billy Wilder. Really just figure everything else is fair game.

Thanks for reading!

[dianelyn]

I loved Annie and Britta's conversation! It rang so true to both their characters!

(And Jeff, you better get your sweet ass to that airport or so help me...)

[elsiesnuffin]

Hello lady! Yay! You write Britta REALLY well, so it's good to know I can do a passable job on her. She makes me so nervous because sometimes I think I make her too harsh.

I'm kind of curious about the end of that threat....

Thanks for reading!

[dianelyn]

Hello! Awwww, thank you! You did an excellent job with her! I really don't think you can get too harsh with Britta, at least initially, because when she gets upset or defensive it's like she has no filter. It's how the people around her that know her well react, and how she reacts later when she relizes what she said, that really matters. (I may have a sister that's EXACTLY like this.)

Well, I'm sure you want to keep these comments at least PG-13 rated, so...:D

[khan81]

Yay! I got my fix. I really felt for Annie when she was talking to Briita. I'm glad Briita was there to give her advice. I hope Jeff gets his sexy butt to the airport. Thank you for the update.

[elsiesnuffin]

Couldn't make you start selling your possessions just to get hits from someone else. Britta acts like Annie's older sister for better or worse. It's nice that Annie has someone she can really talk about this with.

Thank you for reading!

[shopgirl909]

This was so unbelievably perfect that I refuse to accept the fact that this has not happened on the show. Dan Harmon (or his alias Ms. Danielle Harmon) should find you and hire you up.

Oh and tiny typo, (because it is me and I have to), "Are you inside ther terminal?” I think you just mean "the"

Anyway, I am thrilled you updated and I am looking forward to more.

And yes, I was getting formidable with you! ;)

[shopgirl909]

Oh, and I also have to say that I LOVE Italy, and always enjoyed visiting, so I am excited to read about their so-to-be-canon-adventures there! LOL.

[elsiesnuffin]

I saw that $&@?! Typo after I had loaded it, but I'm on my phone now which makes it impossible to edit stuff like that. Sorry!

Maybe I am Dan Harmon. No, I'm not quite bitter enough. Hopefully.

Thanks for stickin' with me!

[shopgirl909]

I literally choked when I read that you were not quite as bitter as Dan Harmon, BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

And, sorry. If you would rather I not point out typos, I can try to resist.