Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses 5/?

May 20, 2011 21:41

Title: It's Always Open Season On Princesses 5/?
Spoilers: Through 'For A Few Paintballs More'
Word Count: 1917
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Dan Harmon own all of this. 
Summary: How Jeff & Annie Spend Their Summer Vacations

AN: I really want to thank everyone for the crazy awesome support you've been showing me and this thing that is kind of eating me ( Read more... )

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mysty_kitty May 24 2011, 04:17:24 UTC
ack!

that asshole! this wasn't even close to being one of the scenarios that I had considered. I'm shocked and actually feel sorry for Jeff. He really doesn't like himself. Even a little bit. It's too bad his denial and self loathing are interfering with Annie.
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I enjoyed this part I really did. I don't have any theories this time. In fact my brain is kind of (to borrow a phrase) wrinkled.

and on a personal note can I say how happy your update came today? It was like a present for me-->I just passed the first of my candidacy exam for my PhD...then to look and see an update was like triply awesome and I was like "Ooo...a prezzie!"

So I enjoyed the update. I'm fascinated to see where you take this and how the rest of the story is gong to progress. I hope that your boss realizes how happy this story makes me (and others) and gives you lots of downtime to work on it, so you can update again soon.

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elsiesnuffin May 25 2011, 00:17:05 UTC
How awesome for you! Congratulations! I'm so happy I could add to a great day!

As for Jeff, he does have a lot of self-loathing. But he eventually has to grow out of it. Probably.

Thank you for reading.

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rozicanuti May 24 2011, 04:22:54 UTC
Ugh Jeff stop thinking so freaking much! He's so gnna regret this; I want Annie to show him what he missed. Hope Annie has a blast she deserves it!
Can't wait to see what happens next.

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elsiesnuffin May 25 2011, 00:24:56 UTC
Thank you for reading! Jeff does need to stop thinking. Or start thinking with a different organ ;)

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shopgirl909 May 24 2011, 04:28:36 UTC
OMG, Jeff flirting with a little girl *dies*

And WE are an awesome fandom, and I would say that 17 might even be a stretch, lol.

Chang watching Jeff sleep…priceless

Abed friending Chang and going to watch movies at Jeff’s place, yep, I can totally see it.

Jeff *shakes head* what a (pardon my language) PUSSY. Sorry, that got ugly. Seriously though, I am very mad at him. Poor Annie.

NO typos! You got me this time!

Looking forward to more.

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elsiesnuffin May 25 2011, 00:37:00 UTC
There actually WAS a typo, so HA! Oh, wait....

Jeff IS a pussy. He just is sometimes. And Chang and Abed need to be bffs, for real. I'm sorry that you're mad at Jeff, but it will probably get better at some point.

Thanks for reading!

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chrissy624 May 24 2011, 04:37:56 UTC
I don't think I've commented on this story yet because I usually read it on my phone, but I figured it was time to finally tell you how much I am loving this story. This is the best J/A story I've read. You nail each of their characters and personalities so well, I feel like I could easily be watching an episode as I read it. I knew Jeff wasn't going to go with her because really, where's the story in that? He has a lot of things to figure out before he decides to jump on a plane wiand spend three weeks in Italy with her. I love that Annie sent that text at the end because it contradicts everything he had been thinking about her since leaving the airport. He was sure that she would be devestated, and hurt, and angry, but she proved him wrong. She proved to him that she can actually be an adult about the situation ( ... )

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elsiesnuffin May 25 2011, 00:45:36 UTC
Wow! Thank you so much! I'm glad you like this. I'm really happy that you weren't completely angry at Jeff's decision. This fic would have to be a lot shorter. I will update as soon as I can, but it might not be until the weekend.

Thank for reading!

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midtega May 24 2011, 04:46:07 UTC
Hello, there I haven't commented on you before, which is shocking considering your work is awesome. The first fic which is full of sexy times with jeff & annie becoming lovers which inevitably lead to a relationship because of his disney fantasy was spectacular. Your annie's birthday fic was top notch, and the one with annie in maxim was visually sexual. So, I loved your work, and this one is no exception. I agree with supercapo, you got brass balls, but I'm a big picture kind of guy and this story road will eventually lead to each other. So, while yes I will join the parade and say jeff is an idiot. He's our idiot and you did a good job of recognizing his deliemma. Cuz deep down as much as he want to be with her I think he doesn't want to risk himself being the reason annie might lose apart of herself. Like you said better being an ex of annie than one at all. Still, he is an idiot cuz its a crazy thing called love jeff, get used to it ( ... )

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elsiesnuffin May 25 2011, 00:57:43 UTC
Word to everything you just said. Just....yes. I promise promise promise to finish this. Honestly, I'm too invested in seeing how this whole thing ends up too.

Thanks for reading!

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