Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses 5/?

May 20, 2011 21:41

Title: It's Always Open Season On Princesses 5/?
Spoilers: Through 'For A Few Paintballs More'
Word Count: 1917
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Dan Harmon own all of this. 
Summary: How Jeff & Annie Spend Their Summer Vacations

AN: I really want to thank everyone for the crazy awesome support you've been showing me and this thing that is kind of eating me ( Read more... )

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nicodemusfleur May 24 2011, 05:37:33 UTC
I should really stop trying to guess what you're going to do next, because I'm ALWAYS wrong, in a good way :) Real life has been insanely crazy lately, but I wanted to take a minute to comment because I AM YOUR BIGGEST FAN (seriously.) and I want to remind you of your awesomeness. OH, and that awesomeness was doubled when you called Two and a Half Men crappy - I've never thought that show was funny at all :P

Anyhoo, I can't wait for the next chapter!!

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elsiesnuffin May 25 2011, 01:09:03 UTC
Sorry to pull the rug out from under you! You're always sooo supportive! I have never met anyone who watches 2.5 Men, but it's gotta be someone.

Thank you for reading!

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wednesdaya May 24 2011, 07:31:39 UTC
He needed a better moisturizer.

LMAO! Oh Jeff :P

Great chapter, looking forward to reading more.

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elsiesnuffin May 25 2011, 01:18:42 UTC
Jeff is so very vain, isn't he?

Thank you for reading!

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sowritesauds May 24 2011, 15:07:04 UTC
I think this is one of your strongest chapters so far. It would have been so easy to send Jeff to Europe with Annie and have them fall in love and be all la-ti-da everything's perfect... but is that what would really happen? Not likely. I'm excited to see what will happen next! Keep up the awesome work. Oh, and I loved the legillimancy shout out. Way to combine two of my favorite things -- Harry Potter and Community. Kudos! :)

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elsiesnuffin May 25 2011, 01:21:28 UTC
I love Harry Potter! And I definitely do not like simple.

Thank you for reading!

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stephanierb May 24 2011, 15:48:35 UTC

There is so much I want to write about this fic, that it would surely exceed the character limit. And all of it good, because this story is really fantastic.

I'll admit, I was disappointed that Jeff didn't go, but after reflecting on it a bit, it was the right decision, both character and story wise. Jeff is definitely not there yet, but I like how difficult this is for him. He does have Annie's welfare in mind, but he wouldn't be so deeply affected by this whole thing if he didn't have something on the line as well.

I do feel for Annie here, of course, and I hope she takes Britta's words to heart and enjoys herself to the fullest in Italy. She deserves it. I'm eager to get her reaction to being stood up.

And I've been reading your comments up thread. I doubt this chapter will drive readers away. There will be more raging, I suspect, but they'll keep coming back. And I hope you know we will hold you to your promise to fix it. ;-)

Fabulous job. Looking forward to more.

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elsiesnuffin May 25 2011, 01:32:31 UTC
Thank you so much for understanding that Jeff has to get his shit together. And thank you for reading!

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heartjd May 24 2011, 17:48:17 UTC
Yesss he's there, he's at the aiport! Aaaaw, baby, cuute.

Wait, what?

No.

Nooooo.

Jeff, don't do that.

Go back. GO BACK!

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ABED. DON'T LET HIM LOCK HIMSELF IN HIS ROOM. HE STILL HAS TIME.

...

Damn it, Winger! *throws fist in the air*

(Those live reactions were brought to you by an helpless shipper.)

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elsiesnuffin May 25 2011, 01:39:24 UTC
I love the play-by-play reactions! You know I couldn't just make it easy for you. Thank you for reading!

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