Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 13

[elsiesnuffin]

Title: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 13
Spoilers: Through Season 2
Word Count: 3528
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Dan Harmon STILL owns it.

AN: Thank you guys for reading this! I am so happy to see the response this story has been getting from people. Well, this chapter starts what I would call the second act of this story. They’re both in the

Comments

[midtega]

Writers and people who do romantic movies or tv shows. This is how its done. U present 2 complicated views on love and then you make it a compelling story out of it. Neither is wrong per say, but u feel in order to make it right there must be an understanding of the minds. Still througout the entire time I said was jeff, launch a blitzkrieg attack like what annie did when she asked u to go to italy. But no cuz its the 2nd act of the story and jeff must conquer his pussy self to get annie. So there. Oh, I totally meant to say jeff talked to pierce after he talked to shirley first. Ha I'm back on the prediction game.

[elsiesnuffin]

Okay, seriously? You can't retroactively predict stuff! :) I'm glad you still like this though. Even if it's not once been what you've thought it would be....All joking aside, thank you so much for reading! And! You get bonus points for using the phrase 'pussy'.

[leigh198910]

Ahh! I got so excited when I saw a new chapter was up... I'm developing a slight J/A fic addiction. This chapter was perfection, so heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time. Oh and Sergio hehe è un bel culo indeed. Am I reading that wrong? I hope not. Really though, well done. Can't wait til the next update!

[elsiesnuffin]

J/A fics do seem to be endlessly entertaining. I think it's going to get really rough before it gets easy for these two. And you did read it right and I thank you for not giving away what it meant yet. I was going to put it in phoenetically, but instead just smushed it together and kind of hoped it would float past without many people noticing.

Thanks so much for reading!

[cozy_cupcake]

SO MUCH LOVE! Can't wait to read what you have coming up next!

[midtega]

This is completly unrelated j/a wise, but ur pic of michael fassbender is awesome. Magneto ftmfw.

[elsiesnuffin]

Thank you so much! I hope I don't disappoint!

[stephanierb]

Oh, Jeff. Jeff, Jeff, Jeff. You are so completely messed up.

I love how totally screwed up Jeff is in this chapter. I had to laugh at his original explanation for why he's there. No luggage, on the first flight to Italy to stop Annie from hooking up with Rich, but she shouldn't read too much into that? LOL

I liked how Jeff's physical reactions to Annie seem to have intensified. The juxtaposition of those reactions with his internal musings on the situation really ratcheted up the tension in this part. You created such emotional intensity here, I was on the edge of my seat, even knowing that there's still a way to go with these two.

I'm very curious as to how Jeff plans to do things differently. He still appears to not know what he wants, but I'm guessing the proximity will help him figure it out (especially if he gets to see Annie in her bikini. A tiny bit of envy, Jeff

[elsiesnuffin]

Jeff is messed up. Very much so. I don't think he does know what he wants or how to get it or what to do with it if/when he gets it.

This was really hard to write because I didn't want it to be too intense or dramatic (neither one of which I accomplished) for Jeff and Annie. Really, they're both screwed up and insecure and scared. I promise there will be heavy J/A interaction for the next several chapters though.

As always, thank you for reading

[stephanierb]

This was really hard to write because I didn't want it to be too intense or dramatic (neither one of which I accomplished) for Jeff and Annie.

I'm not sure that would've been possible. Knowing that this was going to be their first interaction since Jeff stood Annie up, and with the way the last chapter ended, there was already a great deal of anticipated tension. And since there was no way their reunion wouldn't be emotional in some way, this just added to the intensity.

I'm assuming you wanted to keep things a little calmer because you intend to build the tension between them in subsequent chapters. I don't think this chapter was overly angsty - though I am expecting that eventually - but it was tense nonetheless. I hope you aren't disappointed with it because I found it to be a very strong chapter and a good foundation for the second act.

So, still looking forward to more and bracing myself for the coming angst. But I know it will all be worth it.

(It's always darkest before the dawn...)

:-)

[supercapo]

Stupid internet... stupid live journal... stupid won't let me log in. I'm in a bad mood so don't expect this to be all warm and gooey.

[elsiesnuffin]

See, that was very clever. Complimenting me in a way that wasn't really a compliment. You can talk about tension and micro tension to try and distract me, but this is what happened here:

You gave me chocolate and then said nice things, so I think a little bit....YOU'RE my bitch.

See ya around.

[supercapo]

Well that is certainly one way of looking at it. You know... if you want to grossly misread things. If anybody is getting genuinely complimented in my review it's me complimenting myself on calling Jeff's reaction to Sergio weeks before they actually met and the fact that Sergio is a drug dealer.

That's what you should have gotten out of that review.

[elsiesnuffin]

You're complimenting yourself on successfully predicting the reaction (that I wrote) that Jeff had to Sergio ( an original character that I also wrote)? And I'm misunderstanding things?

Okay, pumpkin. Whatever you say. I liked you better when you were kissing my ass. Has that ship just completely sailed now?