Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 17

[elsiesnuffin]

Title: It‘s Always Open Season On Princesses Part 17
Spoilers: Through S2
Word Count: 6082
Rating: R (for language)
Disclaimer: I guess I own Sergio? Maybe? But none of the rest of it.

AN: Whew! Holy cow you guys. We‘ve arrived at chapter seventeen. This chapter is going out to fangirl_101 , who quite randomly requested several weeks ago in the ’Ficcy Friday’

Comments

[fangirl_101]

This is by far my favorite chapter in this series. And by far I mean like, lightyears. I love this whole series but this chapter was straight up perfect. (and not just because you snuck my ficcy friday prompt in--which, was awesome. thank you!!) I love that Annie and Jeff finally TALK in this chapter. Really talk. Jeff's reveal about high school was so endearing. I love his terrified realization that Annie can get anything out of him without even forcing it. And that he realizes she's the one he wants to tell this stuff to. The kiss was amazing and epic, the thunderstorm so visual and really added to the drama of their conversation. Annie's speech about the good ones loving him no matter what he looked like or was interested in. And Jeff's whole conversation with Troy was made of win. Troy not caring about the age difference like it wasn't even an issue. And the reveal that it was Britta's cell. But my absolute favorite part is the conversation they have while in the vineyard. It just... guh! Makes me want to jump around in giddy

[elsiesnuffin]

I thought you might kind of like this chapter. The idea of them walking through a vineyard in the rain was too visually awesome to not use, so when you requested it, I got very excited! You can feel free to girly-rant all over this fic as many times as you want. I'm so happy you liked this so much. I was worried I was trying to do too much in this chapter, with the Jeff/Troy conversation coming after the stuff with Annie, but I guess it worked okay.

I promise not to leave if you promise not to leave! Thanks for reading!

[jessicamherrera]

I haven't read it yet.
I just wanted to say that I saw this when I logged on and I was so happy I squeeled.
My brother looked at me like I was a little retarded.

who knows, I might be.
okay, now I'll read.

[elsiesnuffin]

I'm not, my mother had me tested.

I think she did at least. Maybe not. It would explain some stuff.

[teruel_a_witch]

Well, hello, Sheldon :P

[elsiesnuffin]

Hee!

[sowritesauds]

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Things I loved about this chapter:
Jeff and Annie's ENTIRE conversation in the vineyard, and on the steps

Jeff and Annie in the rain'

Jeff and Annie kissing

The way you write Troy -- he actually sounds like Troy

The twist at the end with it being Britta's phone that Troy answered

The hints you keep dropping about what's happening on Twitter and some kind of movie Troy and Abed are making

Jeff realizing Annie LOVES him, and he's afraid to get with her because he doesn't want her to outgrow him

So, basically, all of it.

It always makes my day when I see a new chapter. But that's nothing you haven't heard before.

Fantastico!

[elsiesnuffin]

Thank you so much for saying that about Troy! I was really really worried about being able to write him convincingly. Donald really can make magic with his mouth, but it's hard to write it.

I will try to make your day again on Monday if I can get my act together. My job is kind of getting in the way of this fic a little bit. How rude!

Grazie!!

[x_avecia_x]

Oh my god, my emotions - MY EMOTIONS!!!!

What in the hell was this? I was expecting another chapter of to and fro between the two of them (and I would have still loved it because I rather enjoy a slow, angst-filled burn) but you floored me with the kiss and THEN Jeff had to try and call someone about it!

Which leads me to my favourite part of this chapter - the Troy/Jeff exchange and the revelation that Jeff was in fact trying to call Britta (so knew Troy was banging Britta on the side here)!!! Why did Jeff want to call Britta? Was he trying to explain, apologize for where he was planning on taking things with Annie (because part of me here believes Jeff now knows he is in no way going to be able to keep from acting on everything now he realizes he is jealous of other men being prospects for Annie).

Urgh, I wish I could write this well - I'm too damn scared to post my own fiction because everyone is so good! Really loved this and can't wait to see what in the hell you're going to do to surprise me now.

x

[elsiesnuffin]

Surprise?

Jeff/Troy was actually MY favorite part too, but I thought people wouldn't pay attention to it with THE KISS happening just before it. I think (and since it's my fic I guess I win?) that he actually was calling Britta so someone could talk some sense into him. She already basically told him to stay away from Annie and he basically hasn't.

You should definitely post something! Thank you so much for reading!

[x_avecia_x]

Well the kiss was epic (mad props to Annie for freaking out and shutting the door in his face - I've done that once!) but Troy just wins all the damn time.

I'm writing something just now and will post once I have more chapters. I've never written in Community fandom before so I'm scared and I'm usually really bad for not finishing stories - determined I'll finish this though as Jeff/Annie are my OTP.

x

P.S The fan art and your icon for this fic is unbelieveably good!

[elsiesnuffin]

I'm so excited you're going to post something! Yay you! I'm pretty bad about leaving things half done too, but somehow I've started a story this time that I genuinely kind of want to see how it ends.

All fan art credit goes to engelen. She's awesome.

[stephanierb]

I so thoroughly enjoyed the last chapter that I was unsure how I would respond to the follow-up, but I have to say, this exceeded all of my expectations

[elsiesnuffin]

YAY! I was worried about the people who liked the last chapter being able to go with this without getting whiplash. It's hard when you're changing POV all the time and in the Jeff POV of the last chapter (which doesn't really exist), he is much clearer about what he wants