Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 17

Jul 06, 2011 13:12


Title: It‘s Always Open Season On Princesses Part 17
Spoilers: Through S2
Word Count: 6082
Rating: R (for language)
Disclaimer: I guess I own Sergio? Maybe? But none of the rest of it.

AN: Whew! Holy cow you guys. We‘ve arrived at chapter seventeen. This chapter is going out to fangirl_101 , who quite randomly requested several weeks ago in the ’Ficcy Friday’ ( Read more... )

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midtega July 7 2011, 01:30:59 UTC
Wow. Seriously wow. I mean sure you been nailing every chapter and the reaction has been visceral, but this was breathtaking. The character development of jeff was great. His high school backstory made perfect sense and its risky to think jeff was always the same in high school, but to have jeff evolve from the dork version to what he is now is fantastic chracter development. I assume u took the basis of that from jeffs real world audition video. I just love it its annie is the one who can break down jeffs insecurity and then built him back up with her infectous optimism. Rain soaked conversations ftw, its something I see in romantic drama & comedies cliches, but u make it work. Keep this up, and this maybe better than some of tv or movies. Finally prediction time, troy is having something something with britta and rich/sergio are having butt sex. U know what don't make that last prediction come true.

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elsiesnuffin July 8 2011, 00:08:19 UTC
It makes sense that at some point, Jeff pulled a Barney Stinson and remade himself completely. His backstory was at least partially because of the Real World video and a little bit based on other canon evidence that he used to be a geek.

I'm hoping I'm already better than 'Vanilla Sky' That movie sucked.

Technically, both those predictions are already happening. So- Win for you? Win for you!

Thanks for reading!

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wallows July 7 2011, 03:36:59 UTC
omg, omg they kissed, and it was wet and awesome. I thought he was going to chicken out again. I love their Walk in the Clouds vineyard scene, picturesque. And classic Troy with older than his years wisdom but doesn't know it is funny. Rich is so sweet and maternal with the towels, and with Sergio's cooking makes a super domestic pair.

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elsiesnuffin July 8 2011, 00:15:18 UTC
Awesome wetness is wet and awesome, true story. Ooh! 'A Walk In The Clouds' is so cheesily perfect in comparison! I used to LOVE that movie hardcore.

Rich and Sergio together can probably rule the world I think. I love them. Thanks for reading!

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I think I'm in love with you, and unlike Jeff I'll admit it. tashagodzilla July 7 2011, 04:05:20 UTC
Oh how much I love your for this, I can't describe my face to you, so I'll just show you what it was like with this adorable man:

... )

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Re: I think I'm in love with you, and unlike Jeff I'll admit it. elsiesnuffin July 8 2011, 00:21:53 UTC
Whose Line gif FTW! I'm actually so distracted by it that it's hard to concentrate right now while writing this.

You're back! I was wondering what had happened to you!

I'm so very happy that you like Rich. I love him as a character so much and he seems to be a fandom pariah. I would be equally happy to find out he is genuine or finding out that he has been killing co-eds for ten years. It diesn't even matter to me.

I'm so happy that the kiss didn't feel forced. I didn't plan on putting it there, but I kind of felt like they needed some sort of release from all the bad mojo I've been foisting upon them.

Thanks for reading and for the gifs! I plan to update again early next week.

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engelen July 7 2011, 06:26:59 UTC
ashkhdfghk Y U SO FAST!?

- Oh Jeff, why you so sexist!? D:< Or, well, at least his wording was...

- nnnnnnngggg drenched Jeff... my eternal baywatch...

... )

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engelen July 7 2011, 08:52:43 UTC
shit it's "on" not "for"...
I'll fix that tomorrow :P

PREPOSITIONS!!!
D:<
*SHAKES FIST*

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elsiesnuffin July 8 2011, 00:32:30 UTC
You win at life for that gif! All time favorite gif of all time! I was totally picturing this when I was writing!

And fantastic job on the added text. Hello, new icon!

Thanks for reading!

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engelen July 8 2011, 01:18:49 UTC
LOLOLOLOL

The best thing is it came out in slo-mo XD
It's one of the few gifs I've made, but it's my favourite XD

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petrichor_fizz July 7 2011, 12:58:00 UTC
WHY, ANNIE, WHY?

I think it's telling that Jeff is so sure that Annie will get married and have kids, and so sure he won't. I assuming that's one of his many hang-ups about their 'incompatibility' (FOOLISH BOY).

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elsiesnuffin July 8 2011, 00:34:31 UTC
Annie's side is next and it will be explained a little bit at least.

Jeff knows everything. If he says he won't love anyone that much, I'm sure he's right....

Thanks for reading!

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