Comments | elsiesnuffin: Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 22

elsiesnuffin

Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 22

Aug 02, 2011 22:30

Title: It’s Always Open Season On Princesses Part 22
Spoilers: Through S2
Word Count: 5341
Rating:…M…?
Disclaimer: Dan Harmon owns it. The show might end with Abed/Annie babies for all I know.

AN: This one is going out to teruel_a_witch and midtega , but for very different reasons. Watch out for my flying grey matter. I wouldn’t want to get any on you.

( That's right, it's smut! Well, smut...ish...like )

fanfiction

Comments 51

heartjd August 3 2011, 04:29:13 UTC

my mind has been blown. Twice.

I'll come back later when I'm more coherent and not on my phone.

I can feel I'll have nice dreams.

*sleepy goofy grin*

shopgirl909 August 3 2011, 04:30:04 UTC

First of all, I have never been so happy to have twitter text me with M_M posts than I am right at this moment. The second I read the text saying you posted a new chapter I was running towards my computer and to be clear, I DON'T run ( ... )

elsiesnuffin August 4 2011, 00:24:18 UTC

Aww, you ran? That's so sweet. Nobody has ever run for me before. I changed the background right away after your last comment. I have had this feeling like I should change it for a while, but I just really don't like anything else and this works with my new icon, so I'm just going to stick with it. Easy to read and formats nicely and good color combination.

I think maybe one of Jeff's magical powers is his perfect breath. Honestly, I couldn't figure out a way for him to get out of bed and not make it like 'they're about to make out', so I just left it and thought maybe if Annie wanted it badly enough (heh heh) that she wouldn't mind that much.

Poor Rich, walking in on sex and then getting outed to Jeff. He really was the most sympathetic character this chapter somehow. I love him so much.

You forgot she saw him naked? Now I finally have an excuse to post this:

( ... )

shopgirl909 August 4 2011, 05:22:29 UTC

Sorry, I meant that I forgot that she saw him naked TWICE. As in,"wow we sure have come far since you started this story."

Still though, my miscommunication is worth that beautiful picture. His leg on the table really sends it home.

second_shooter August 3 2011, 04:40:39 UTC

I'm sick and stayed home today so when I saw that you had uploaded I started to feel better. Then we get awesome Jeff/Annie almost sex and when Rich walked in I cringed so much so well done.
WHAT IS THIS CONTRACT? I need to know like pronto.
Now I am feeling better but in desperate need of next chapter - like always.

elsiesnuffin August 4 2011, 00:26:06 UTC

I'm sorry you're not feeling, but it's good to know all you really need is some Jeff/Annie almost sex to perk up :)

I think this contract will come up again. Probably. I will try to post again by Monday, but I can't make promises.

Thank you for reading!

midtega August 3 2011, 05:37:13 UTC

3 words: SO FUCKING CLOSE ( ... )

elsiesnuffin August 4 2011, 00:44:18 UTC

SO CLOSE TO FUCKING! Aurgh!

Hey now, don't be hating on Rich. If Jeff really wanted to bang her, he could have locked the door.

I love play by play. I gave you the shout out because not that long ago you said that they were going to have sex, but only after a long honest discussion. I went another way. Were it not for Rich, Jeff would have played quite the game of hide the salami with her. Did her imaginary boobs distract you? Why are boobs so distracting? I'm so excited that even though you knew I was baiting you, you still fell for it. Awesome.

You just don't learn with these predictions, do you?

You really still think you're going to win the game we have going? Really? I'm just feeling pretty lucky I guess. But it was still awfully nice of you to provide me with a list of prompts. That wasn't presumptious at all.

Thanks for reading.

...and you might want to start chilling that beer.

midtega August 4 2011, 02:57:34 UTC

U know if u weren't such a damn good writer of jeff and annie sex or in this case hot almost sex. I would of called u a cocktease, but I didn't I choose my frustrations on rich. I'm going to be a bigger man and say sorry rich. Reading sex can people crazy or maybe the right word is horny. I'm going to say crazy just to be tame or safe. Finally thanks for keeping what I said in my mind. Seems like people want the jeff and sex as a reward for jeff and annie acknowlging each other and their probs. And to be honest I'm ok with that. I'm just amazed that ur writing has driven me crazy, and I read a lot of j/a fics. Keep doing what u do.

nicodemusfleur August 3 2011, 09:09:50 UTC

DAMNIT, RICH! WHY DO YOU HAVE TO BE THE WAY YOU ARE!

In other news, you are giving me panic attacks with this mysterious contract. Seriously, if this is another heartwrenching obstacle for the two of them, I might have to do something radical...

And as always, 'awesome' is your first, middle, and last name :)

elsiesnuffin August 4 2011, 01:30:35 UTC

Poor Rich and the hated that is coming his way.

This contract might be a point of contention, yeah. It was going to have to be revealed at some point. It's coming, so get ready.

Aw, thanks. But Awesome Awesome Awesome seems really formal. You can just call me Awesome for short ;) Thanks for reading, sweetie!