Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 22

[elsiesnuffin]

Title: It’s Always Open Season On Princesses Part 22
Spoilers: Through S2
Word Count: 5341
Rating:…M…?
Disclaimer: Dan Harmon owns it. The show might end with Abed/Annie babies for all I know.

AN: This one is going out to teruel_a_witch  and midtega ,  but for very different reasons.  Watch out for my flying grey matter. I wouldn’t want to get any on you.

Comments

[supercapo]

You thought you'd lose points with me for this? This isn't something to get angry over. I mean I guess I could if you really wanted me to.

As usual this is really well written. I've read most of your stuff and you always write sexy times well and this is no exception.

I didn't expect them to get as far as they got. It's still a little too early in the story to expect them to actually get it on. I thought Rich interrupting was pretty funny. And given what we know about him in your story he got quite the eyeful. So good for him I guess.

As with everybody else I'm really curious as to what's in that contract. I'm wondering if Annie's going to read it then go to Venice with Jeff and confront him or if this is a bomb we're going to keep sitting on.

So yeah. Good update actually I'll try to get angry for you in another review.

[elsiesnuffin]

Well, you know I always know how to handle you better when you're yelling at me, so really work on that for next time.

I feel like this is bizarro world or something. Almost no one is upset that I left Jeff erect and alone in this chapter. I think there is a serious lack of empathy for him as a character in this fandom. If I had made it Jeff's decision to stop the fornication (point?) process(which would never happen), everyone would have felt bad for Annie. And good for Rich for getting to see Jeff naked? My brain hurts now.

It was actually a good update? Thanks, buddy.

[supercapo]

Huh, my email didn't inform me that you responded. Weird.

Well currently you're really the only one that makes me yell, just not this time. Maybe on the next update.

I think that part of the reason everyone was cool with Jeff not getting his freak on with Annie is because you also made it kind of cool with him. He initially was rightfully pissed and then he chilled and was kind of like "Raincheck?" So from that point of view it's okay cause he clearly intends to make good on that promise.

And you've sort of diffused a lot of potential anger toward Rich by making him so adorkable and gay. I can't hate Rich if he's not a threat.

And yes, it was a good update. Pal

[heartjd]

So, Jeff has to PAY Pierce?? I kinda thought Pierce was paying Jeff for keeping his hands off Annie or something...

Hmmm, I'm really intrigued now.

Oh, and I hate those who knock and enter a room. Some privacy, please!! Even if you're gay!! ;)

[elsiesnuffin]

It will be explained coming up, but I wanted to be clear. What he is carrying is a promissory note. Make of that what you will until I update again.

Gay people should be able to just enter wherever they want. I can't believe he even bothered knocking. He shouldn't have to at all.

Thanks for reading!

[stephanierb]

I was just about to turn in last night when I decided to check M/M one more time. MY FATAL MISTAKE. After seeing your post could I then wait until this morning and just turn in? ABSOLUTELY NOT.

This is going to sound downright crazy coming from me, but I'm glad for the coitus interruptus. Or rather, near-coitus interruptus. I agree with Annie's initial reaction - they really need to talk openly before taking things to that level.

So, no Rich hate here. And I'm wondering how much of a view he got before Jeff ducked down behind Annie's bed. Hee.

That's not to say that I didn't thoroughly enjoy what came before. Or didn't come, as it turned out. HA.

Sorry, I'm a little loopy this morning. Back to the review.

“Was it just because you were drunk and I looked hot last night?”

Ahahaha. Oh Jeff, how do you manage to be so egotistical and insecure at the same time? I cracked up at that line.

And of course, I LOVED this bit:

“More specifically, every time you…force me into a glee club or…” He cut off and took a breath

[elsiesnuffin]

Almost everyone is happy they didn't have sex. I am choosing to take that as a compliment that people are more interested in them doing things right than in some skin on skin action.

You know what's funny? Ejaculation humor. Every time.

I think I'm going to post again on Sunday or possible Monday, and you are right about the spinning turbine. I want to hear whatever thoughts you're thinking about having.

Thanks so much for reading!

[stephanierb]

I am choosing to take that as a compliment that people are more interested in them doing things right than in some skin on skin action.

You should. I definitely want the J/A sexy times, but when both of them are clear and on the same page.

I have some thoughts about Pierce and his motivations. I have to meditate a bit longer on what that language in the contract means, and I'm not sure I caught all of your hints, so I'm going to read again and think it through a bit more. I gave up on guessing awhile back, but Pierce has been such a wildcard so far, I can't help but speculate a little. I'll definitely share when I have it all straight in my head!

[elsiesnuffin]

There is a LOT of Pierce based stuff coming up. I hope if you're re-reading that you're not finding massive plot holes. And there really haven't been that many hints. I was kind of purposely keeping things vague, since neither Jeff or Annie really know what is going on with Pierce, but the next chapter definitely deals with the Pierce factor. I would call the next chapter the last one in the second act.

[thegrin]

Oh.My.God .... this chapter ... wow *iz dead from the hotness*

I didn't expect them to have sex but then I thought that maybe they were really going to do it but noooo Rich ruined everything ... WHY RICH, WHY ?!? I still love him though! lol

I wonder why he came in Annie's room, maybe he wanted to see if she was alright or he wanted to talk to her about Sergio, since it seems that they had a fight, right ?

Anyway, now that Annie has found the contract, things will become complicated between them, I guess! I can't wait to read more, as always, excellent writing ♥

[elsiesnuffin]

Stupid gay Rich. Ruining everything with his good looks and entering rooms without waiting for the okay. He was indeed coming in to talk to Annie about Sergio and what they were arguing about at the party.

Thanks for reading!

[engelen]

Yep
so
this chapter made me feel like I need to see Joel naked.

[elsiesnuffin]

You kind of make it sound like the thought just occured to you.

[engelen]

Yeah, I hadn't thought about him being naked in a while.

Now I NEED new photoshoots.

[elsiesnuffin]

You hadn't thought about him being naked in a while? Are you okay? I thought about him being naked four times just today. You're supposed to be the one who is infatuated here. I've seen the sketch dump sweetie.