Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 23

[elsiesnuffin]

Title: It’s Always Open Season On Princesses Part 23
Spoilers: Through S2
Word Count: 4628
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Dan owns them.

AN:  I'm pretty proud of the maturity level you guys have.  Does this mean that Jeff and Annie don't need to have sex at all?  This chapter is the last one of the 2nd Act of this story.  I will not be around for a couple days

Comments

[honey_pie1]

I haven't read it yet, but I just wanted say I did a marathon reading session of this fic and I am ADDICTED. It's just... you're awesome. And I wasn't even mad about the almost-but-not-quite-sex scene. I trust your judgement!

<3

[midtega]

Ill probably have a more coherent comment later, but I need to post a minute by minute review. First off, I'm ready to get drunk off of this, reading this was a thriller of a conversation. I think its fandon that long jeff & annie epic fic have a devastating argument that eventually leads to sadness then a journey for both of them to grow as characters then a declaration of love and finally sex. See supercapos deabte sequel or lapfricadoras there's only one girl in the world for example. The ending did surprise me however, seemed like a pause from the argument from pierce. Oh, pierce TELL ME WHAT IS UR GAME? Anyway good chapter can't wait for the home strech. Oh, btw have u heard from supercapo its been a while since I saw a fic from him and I'm starting to worry

[supercapo]

I'm fine dude. I've had a lot going on and haven't been able to devote the time I need to write. I'm hoping to get it done this weekend. No promises though

[midtega]

Cool,cool,cool,cool,cool

[elsiesnuffin]

Bromance intact. I'm so happy.

[cozy_cupcake]

Can I ask a favor before this is over (hopefully not for a very long time)? Can Camila get hers, like really big. Haha She's Pierce's bitchy eyes & ears. Really perfect female version of Pierce to get under Jeff's skin.

Uh oh can't wait to read what happens when they're back in Greendale? Will there be an airplane chapter?

I'm pretty proud of the maturity level you guys have. Does this mean that Jeff and Annie don't need to have sex at all?

My first reaction was WHO ARE THESE PEOPLE!? but then I thought about it...the chase is so sexy but so is them having sex sooo it's a toss up.

Good luck with Donkey Kong!!!

[elsiesnuffin]

Huh. So....do people not like Camilla then? It seems like she might not be your favorite here. I will say she's not done in this story yet.

I had plenty of people relieved that Jeff didn't stick it to her, I will have you know. I think it's kind of crazy. But to each their own.

Thanks for reading.

[cozy_cupcake]

I like that you write her so well that she gets under my skin as well as the characters in the story.

Oh, I'm all for non-violent Jeff, but Camilla deserves a pie in the face or a push in the pool.

[fangirl_101]

Is Annie really going to leave Italy without actually SEEING Italy? Yes, she and Jeff did that one sightseeing day and that was great, and yes, I get that there's a hot guy to fight with, kiss, and have angsty thoughts about, but it's freaking Italy

[elsiesnuffin]

This has really been the worst vacation ever for Annie. I didn't plan for that to happen and neither did she. She thought things were just starting for her. I would hope you have a much better vacation than she has. I wonder if anyone has ever killed off Pierce in a fic. I should do that sometime. No one will die during the making of this fic, except maybe me.

Thanks for reading.

[fangirl_101]

Yeah you're right, this has been a bad vacation. Poor Annie. It's had it's moments, but overall probably not what she was expecting or wanting.

I don't think anyone has actually killed off Pierce in a fic, but I've read future fics where he's already dead.

[stephanierb]

I'm pretty proud of the maturity level you guys have. Does this mean that Jeff and Annie don't need to have sex at all?Uh. What? I think folks would revolt if they believed J/A weren't going to eventually seal the deal. lol

[elsiesnuffin]

This chapter was a really difficult one for me to write. I didn't want there to be a bad guy in this argument.

I was thinking that Jeff buying his own ticket was throwing a lot of people off. He definitely does not have the money to pay his own way. I looked it up and a last minute flight to Rome could cost up to 4400 dollars. And the idea that Pierce could gouge Jeff so badly and overcharge him and then do it with extra ulterior motives really made me giggle. I'm kind of sadistic when it comes to Jeff apparently.

You can make dirty jokes to me all day long sweetheart.

Thank you so much for reading!