Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 25

Aug 20, 2011 22:11


Title: It’s Always Open Season On Princesses Part 25
Spoilers: Through Season 2
Word Count: 3854
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I still don’t own anything listed here.

AN: I could tell everyone yet again how awesome you all are for reading this.  But I'm going to mix it up a little.  Instead, I give you an excerpt from the classic Tone Loc hit, 'Funky Cold ( Read more... )

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lunamystik August 21 2011, 13:19:43 UTC
It's great to see the gang again - although I'm 100% sure Jeff would not agree with this statement. Yet again, I am intrigued by Camilla; who is she? What is her link to Pierce?

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elsiesnuffin August 22 2011, 17:32:53 UTC
Jeff is kind of on the edge, yeah. Things are only going to get more and more stressful for him unfortunately. And the Camilla question will be addressed before too long.

Thanks for continuing to read!

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thegrin August 21 2011, 21:12:55 UTC
I love that the whole group is there for Pierce, I can't wait to see him interact with them, and maybe explain the contract to Annie!
Well, I can see that the situation between Jeff and Annie is still tense but I felt that they are slowly getting better, at least I hope so, lol!
Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one <3

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elsiesnuffin August 22 2011, 17:34:55 UTC
Things are going to start happening pretty quickly now, and it will thankfully get better the more they actually all communicate.

Thanks so much for reading.

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supercapo August 22 2011, 03:13:20 UTC
Well I promised to be immature this time. And I won't have it be said that I don't keep promises I really want to.

But I figured that I'd have somebody else articulate my emotions in this situation. Just replace Annie's name with yours.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fTCL6f5YtDQ#t=00m04s

Seriously you love to hurt us.

Apart from that, great update. It was fun to see the whole group, funny creepy Chang too. Also... awww.... Jeff is slowly starting to realize he's in love.

Good job Buddy.

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elsiesnuffin August 22 2011, 17:40:21 UTC
Tee. Hee. This wasn't all that immature, but I think it was a big step forward for you. Congrats. Donald Glover crying is on my list of favorite things at the moment, and given enough time could probably transition to my all-time list.

Thanks for reading...pal.

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midtega August 22 2011, 10:57:22 UTC
Probably wont be long as the previous ones but here goes. First off, congratulations you beaten me on the supercapo game. I admit it hurts a little, but I have emerged fully humbled and bow down to your commenting greatness. Although I do make funny, sweet, sometimes over the top comments. Depends if the fic grabs me emotionally,which this fic has done. Anyway congrats.

Now this somewhat filler chapter is good,cuz it does 2 things. One sets up the important destination for jeff and annie to talk to pierce which will be epic and funny. And 2 once again you have captured the inner thoughts and perspective of jeff really well, who seemingly wants to continue this dtr argument with annie so badly, that its almost his heart cant take it, or it could mean he's in love, whatever its your show to build on. Still, you have managed to have done something completly original and freeze any big angsty arguments in favor of a plot point twist that may hold the key to the relationships fate. Well done. I can't wait for the next one.

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elsiesnuffin August 22 2011, 18:18:49 UTC
I have to say, you are being amazingly gracious and humble about this entire thing. Way to be mature in the face of failing so greatly ;)

This chapter is almost entirely filler, not even somewhat. This is the result of thinking I could write two different POVs in this story and still get all the information in that I needed to each time.

Thanks for reading!

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stephanierb August 22 2011, 13:21:46 UTC

Oh, Jeff. So close, SO CLOSE to finally getting it. Britta and Abed's overtures clearly aren't enough, he needs to have it pounded into him. ;-)

Dirty enough?

Seriously, though. It makes me sad that Jeff is so unfamiliar with that feeling that he doesn't get what that feeling is. Either that, or his denial is even deeper than I thought.

I was a little surprised that Jeff actually brought up the possibility that Pierce was faking again. I thought by now he was convinced. But then again, if Pierce is faking, that means he doesn't have cancer.

I really liked Britta here. She's still obviously bothered by it, but she's trying to be a friend to Jeff.

A lot to love here, even though there's very little Jeff/Annie interaction. And of course, I'm dying to know what is in that envelope.

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elsiesnuffin August 22 2011, 18:27:21 UTC
That was just the right amount of dirty. Thank you so much.

Jeff has got issues on top of issues on top of issues. AND he doesn't understand the feeling in his chest. Great combination. I think Jeff knows that Pierce isn't faking, but he's holding out hope that he is, because then Pierce is without a doubt the bad guy. No gray area there in that case.

Thank you so much for reading this so faithfully, sweetie.

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