Fic: Trapped In The Closet

[elsiesnuffin]

Title: Trapped In The Closet
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2860
Disclaimer: Don't own em.  Please don't sue me, Dan Harmon.

This is a dialogue only piece I wrote a while ago.  Let me know what you think.  Unless you hate it.

Comments

[eva_aftagrl]

LOVE IT!!! The random dialogue was awesome, and kudos for throwing in Troy and Britta.

[dearygirl]

I am really super impressed with what you've managed to do here with just dialogue. I could still very much picture this scene and the words were just so THEM.

And this made me laugh:

“This from the guy who just blatantly accused me of wanting to have sex with him.”

“Are you drunk?”

“Yes, I keep a flask strapped to my thigh.”

“If that were true, you would get invited to more parties.”

Awesome.

[lunamystik]

Jeff and Annie all in dialogue is brilliant! You got the tones just right, and the references really added to the whole thing. Bravo!

[teruel_a_witch]

“Okay, you just sounded so much like my dad there.”
!!!!! I just keep finding those little things in your works, how are you so prophetic??? Or does Harmon and co just use your fanfic as guidelines to write J/A?

“Have you seen them together? They’re adorable.”

“Britta doesn’t do adorable.”

“She just doesn’t do adorable when she’s around you.”
SO TRUE. Britta is just so guarded and flinch-y around Jeff, probably "douche-ray vision" kicks in, heh. The moment Jeff tries to move her hair and she recoils always come to mind XD

do you want me to kiss you?”
Do you like texting, Jeff? Does Shirley love her purse? Does Abed watch TV?

I would watch an entire episode of just Jeff and Annie stuck in a closet, hell, I'd watch an entire episode of them just sitting together and not doing anything. But obv. I would watch them kissing for the rest of my life and never want anything else. If I were Abed I would have just locked them in a closet as many times as necessary until reached the required result. WE NEED MORE MAKEOUTS. THAT HAPPEN.