Comments | em1983: Playing Favorites

em1983

Playing Favorites

Feb 19, 2011 17:29

She wanders back from her talking head segment with Abed and flops down in the chair next to Jeff. He’s flipping slowly through a People magazine as if it’s the most interesting thing he’s ever seen (and Annie knows him well enough to know he’s really thinking about his father) so she takes the opportunity to lean a bit over until his arm makes ( Read more... )

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actual_corrine February 20 2011, 01:57:22 UTC

Aw, so cute!

em1983 February 20 2011, 06:24:55 UTC

Thanks!

blond_bear February 20 2011, 02:20:38 UTC

I love this! I love how comfortable they are around each other...but most of all I love those last few lines :) I would pay a hefty sum to see that on the show...right down to that happy, embarrassed Jeff smile.

em1983 February 20 2011, 06:26:28 UTC

I really liked the comfortableness in the last episode. Which is weird since they really didn't have any scenes alone or even much dialog together. It was just the naturalness of them LEANING into each other the whole time. I hope they keep this up, and I hope they show more and more of Jeff being happier with the group (especially Annie) cause he's adorable when he actually smiles.

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em1983 February 20 2011, 06:26:50 UTC

Lol - couldn't leave the fic without a little sexiness.

supercapo February 20 2011, 02:46:25 UTC

Brilliant. That's some perfect characterization with Jeff and a clever way to talk about favorites. You've got a great writing style and a good feel for the characters. Great work

em1983 February 20 2011, 06:27:35 UTC

Thanks you so much. I'm really nervous always with Jeff, but I also know that their characters are so ingrained and real to us fans, they I don't have to describe every movement in order for people to see them anymore.

Awww mustbethursday3 February 20 2011, 05:29:01 UTC

He’s silent for a while, head kinda rolled back towards his shoulder, looking down at her. Then he smiles arrogantly and cocks a thumb back at himself. “Are you kidding? This guy’s my favorite, because he’s awesome.”

She laughs and looks back down. Then she decides to risk it. She rocks a bit to the side, still looking at her tiara, and whispers conspiratorially, “You’re my favorite too.”

You know sometimes you read a fic and there are like a few sentences that if they had been ALL that there was to the fic it'd still work and make you awww or HEE. Well, above is that :D

That was such a cute moment, and I can really see it happening. Also so true on the favorites!

(poor Pierce - lol)

Re: Awww em1983 February 20 2011, 06:29:02 UTC

I really had to analyze the favorites part too - plus, Jeff says that disparaging remark about Britta and I wanted to make up for it by having her be someone's favorite (no Britta-hate from me, I like her, but I felt like Jeff wouldn't hesitate to be snarky behind her back).