Even with the sombre atmosphere and the feeling that everything may go to shit at any minute, you made it seem like somewhere, fucking far down the road, these kids (now adults) may just be able to sort out their fucked up messes OMG I LOVE YOU. That was it really, the point of writing this, and in fact if I'm honest then I think that's more than what I set out to do, so I'm well chuffed if thats what you got from it
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♥ I was really looking forward to this one, because I like canon fics that explore the end of S4 and how that would turn out. Anyway I adored it obviously. I thought the different POVs worked really nicely. I loved that you include Tony and Katie/Tony, yay. The repetition in the first part with Effy was really nice. Brilliant all around.
i'm so so horrible at articulating when i really love something, so i'm just going to make this simple. I'M OBSESSED WITH THIS. like every single facet of it is PERFECT, and every POV is spot on, and KATIE/TONY OMG. PERFECT FIERCE FLAWLESS OTP. and cook... poor broken cook. poor broken all of them, really.
also, i think my favorite part is the cook/effy at the end. i think you handled them perfectly. i love CE with all my heart, but they wouldn't just jump into bed together straight after freddie's death like i've read in so many other fics, so this is such a realistic treatment of it.
adding this to memories so i can read it again and cry hahaha ♥ beautiful.
also, i'm simultaneously freaked out by and in love with the fact that foster is still out there creeping, climbin in yo windows, snatchin yo people up, etc.
Well thanks for taking the time to say, much appreciated :) I COULD NOT HELP KATIE/TONY, THE UNIVERSE WANTED THEM TO BE TOGETHER IN THIS FIC AND WHO AM I TO FIGHT THE UNIVERSE.
Ah, yeah, I agree that them taking that route is rarely likely to work out for them. And I'd rather that they ended up fixing each other together, so there needed to be some time for them to get to grips with themselves first.
Thank you so much for the compliments! ♥
(Ha, I think that the possibility of something is often more scary than the actual thing, so for Cook to know he could be anywhere is more scary than him being somewhere. But yeah, creepy guy got away with it all here :/ )
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Even with the sombre atmosphere and the feeling that everything may go to shit at any minute, you made it seem like somewhere, fucking far down the road, these kids (now adults) may just be able to sort out their fucked up messes OMG I LOVE YOU. That was it really, the point of writing this, and in fact if I'm honest then I think that's more than what I set out to do, so I'm well chuffed if thats what you got from it ( ... )
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So glad that you thought the mix of POVs worked - they caused me some major headaches! And, yeah, I couldn't help myself with Katie/Tony ;)
So pleased you liked it!
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And to peace with S4?! That's high praise indeed!
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also, i think my favorite part is the cook/effy at the end. i think you handled them perfectly. i love CE with all my heart, but they wouldn't just jump into bed together straight after freddie's death like i've read in so many other fics, so this is such a realistic treatment of it.
adding this to memories so i can read it again and cry hahaha ♥ beautiful.
also, i'm simultaneously freaked out by and in love with the fact that foster is still out there creeping, climbin in yo windows, snatchin yo people up, etc.
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Ah, yeah, I agree that them taking that route is rarely likely to work out for them. And I'd rather that they ended up fixing each other together, so there needed to be some time for them to get to grips with themselves first.
Thank you so much for the compliments! ♥
(Ha, I think that the possibility of something is often more scary than the actual thing, so for Cook to know he could be anywhere is more scary than him being somewhere. But yeah, creepy guy got away with it all here :/ )
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Thanks mate, that's really great to hear! ♥
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