Fic: The Weight that Grounds Him

[emion_lemot]

Title: The Weight that Grounds Him

Characters/pairings: Jack/Ianto, Gwen/Rhys

Rating: 15

Warnings: Suicidal themes, angst

Spoilers: Set after the season 2 finale, so no CoE spoilers whatsoever.

Disclaimer: All that is Torchwood is property of the BBC and Russell T. Davies. I own nothing, not even the key board I’m typing on.

Summary: “You’re so

Comments

[ally_p_x]

Read it! Loved it!

If this is your first attempt - wow!

And also, I should mention that English isn't my first language.

Never would've known that. Well written, especially as it's in second person, I'm not brave enough to attempt to write that way.

Will be looking out for more of your work.

[emion_lemot]

Thank you so much for your comment! It genuinely warmed my heart. I love to experiment with language, and I've become immensely fond of the second person narrative. You should really try it out! :)

[lunachickk]

That was positively bittersweet and heartbreakingly beautiful!

And also, I should mention that English isn't my first language.

I never would have known!! Plus you tackled the second person POV. *applauds you* Well done!
I certainly hope you plan on writing more fic!

[emion_lemot]

Why thank you! Bittersweet, that's good way of descibing it, and sort of what I had in mind when writing this. I do plan to write more fic, when my uni studies allows me to, haha!

[neechan_chana]

it was beautiful ! <3

(and I loved the second person narrative ^^)

and also, first fic? doesn't look like it, it was really great!

[emion_lemot]

Thank you so much for your kind words! It really means a lot to me!

[remuslives23]

God, that was fantastic! That was your first attempt at fan fic? Wow! It was beautifully written with a much better grasp of English than I do and it's my first language. :) Second person does tend to put me off a bit usually, but to be honest, I didn't notice after the second or third sentence. It was too well done.

[emion_lemot]

Thank you so much! And yes, it really was my first attempt at fan fic! Glad I successfully converted you into liking the second person narrative, mission accomplished! ;)

Re: I'm impressed!

[emion_lemot]

I know that second person narrative can be hard to follow, but I so do love to write in that style that I simply couldn't resist. I'm glad I managed to pull you in anyways, and I hope it wasn't too bad for you ;)