Fic: The Weight that Grounds Him

[emion_lemot]

Title: The Weight that Grounds Him

Characters/pairings: Jack/Ianto, Gwen/Rhys

Rating: 15

Warnings: Suicidal themes, angst

Spoilers: Set after the season 2 finale, so no CoE spoilers whatsoever.

Disclaimer: All that is Torchwood is property of the BBC and Russell T. Davies. I own nothing, not even the key board I’m typing on.

Summary: “You’re so

Comments

[ab_n0rmal]

Wow, second person in a second language. Well done! And, I usually don't like uber!emo!Ianto, but you made it plausible, not excessive. Thank you.

[emion_lemot]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

[hazelayes]

Can I friend you? I'd really not want to miss your second fanfic :)
This was brilliant! A truly angst ridden Ianto who isn't remotely woobie or childish, just desperate and needing help. Your second person voice was cool and sustained, a very good job, and I certainly wouldn't have known you weren't a native english speaker from this. Where are you from, if you don't mind me asking?

[emion_lemot]

Of course you can friend me; I'd be happy if you did! And yeah, desperation's what I was aiming for :)

I'm born and bred in Sweden of all places. And when it comes to Torchwood, barely anyone knows what it is here. I've only met a handful of people who have watched *and* liked the show. Such a shame.

[mscatmoon]

Very good story! English may not be your first language but you obviously have an excellent grasp of it. That very last line of the story... gives me chills.

You're a talented writer, I hope to see more fic from you.

[lazy_8s]

Gorgeous look at a Ianto, whose grief and deep sorrow have taken their toll. Kudos to Rhiannon for calling Jack to rush back to his lover.

[hab318princess]

great first attempt, here's hoping for more...

heartbreaking but it's also wonderful