Crossing Borderlines - 4/?

Aug 25, 2012 00:00


A/N:  Sorry this chapter took even longer than I thought.  I handwrote some while I was on vacation, but it took me forever to even have a chance to type it up.

Chapter 4

December 2002

“Arizona!” Callie whined as she opened her apartment door.  “Do you really miss me that much?  I know I’m irresistible, but we’ll see each other tomorrow in…” Callie’s ( Read more... )

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nerdfightergirl August 25 2012, 04:11:30 UTC
Oh, the feels.

I love that you worked in Arizona being scared and taking it out as anger.

I look forward to the next installment.

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emmer23 August 26 2012, 16:42:48 UTC
Thanks! I thought it was fitting for Arizona's character to lash out at Callie during a time like that. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

Next installment will hopefully be next weekend!

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i_fly_solo August 25 2012, 04:14:38 UTC
YAY! It's back! :D (And so are you. Welcome back!)

This chapter is beautiful. Arizona (and Callie, really) is totally spot-on here. You really have a knack for making the characters AU but still true to themselves. I also love how the chapter is relatively short but still packed with emotion. You managed to fit a lot in there. I love the email Callie sends - supportive, sweet, respectful, but still with the Callie-humor we all know and love.

I could keep listing things that are great about this chapter, but I'm sleepy and would probably end up saying a lot of things that don't make sense. :P I'll just leave off by saying I'm super glad you and this story are back and that I very much look forward to chapter 5!

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emmer23 August 26 2012, 17:06:44 UTC
I am back! And hopefully it won't be another three weeks before I write another chapter.

Thank you so much for your kind words. Nothing is nicer to hear than someone saying that Callie and Arizona are in character.

Haha I'd love to hear your sleepy, nonsensical compliments. ;)

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awesomegreys August 25 2012, 04:50:00 UTC
Yay you and this story are back! I'm happy :)
Great chapter, full emotional....so Callie is the girl Arizona left behind after Tim's death, the one to shut down and start a new life in a twisted way to get over Tim's death, or try because she is definitely in love...poor Callie she is so in love too she is so wonderful and caring and seems she has been mistreated a little and has payed a huge sad price with Tim's death and the way it affected Arizona.
Love love love how they both are in character even if in a plot so original and different.

This story is amazing, I love it every chapter more and more. Great job as usual my dear.

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emmer23 August 29 2012, 22:01:35 UTC
Maybe that's why they break up...or maybe that's just part of it. ;)

You are wonderful with all your lovely words. Thank you!

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penguinnotes August 25 2012, 04:54:58 UTC
yay you're back!!! Thank you thank you for the update! Been obsessively checking back and forth. I'm so happy you're back. :)

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emmer23 August 29 2012, 22:02:50 UTC
Sorry for making you obsessively check! I'm thinking the next chapter will be posted on Friday or Saturday so that you don't have to keep checking. ;)

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knocks_you_down August 25 2012, 04:57:05 UTC
Wow so many emotions! Poor Arizona, even if she said she didn't want Callie there, she obviously needed her. Callie stepping up and being there for Arizona in a horrible situation, she has such a big heart.

Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!

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emmer23 August 29 2012, 22:04:48 UTC
Callie really does have a huge heart. It's one of the many many things I (and Arizona) love about her.

Thank you!

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