LJ Idol Season 11: Week 25 - The Catbird's Seat

[encrefloue]

The despotic Florida sun was almost as cruel a welcome as Roy’s gambit:

“Why are you so cold?”

With a neck craning towards the unlucky blades of grass that bore the stain of the 30 yard line (such that the small lump of his chin sat feebly upon pillowy tiers of fat), yet with dispassionate eyes cast up, tucked just under the awning of a brow

Comments

[alycewilson]

Beautifully written. It takes you through the range of Marco's emotions. Also, I may be wrong, but it feels like there's an undercurrent of attraction between him and drum major which could account for part of his shyness.